Chapter 3 Page 11
stabbyfairy on Sept. 3, 2007
OK, so this is more based on the Buntingmobile than actually being it. Whereas the real car is more-or-less stable, this one is held together by Scotch tape and wishes. And some of the details are nicked from my Mum's Corsa because that was the only reference material I had at the time. XD
Fyrinae sleeps like a cat. They look like they weigh no more than a bag of sugar but it turns out they're as heavy as an anvil and twice as difficult to move. Poor Skye. XP
I didn't change the background much from when I was complaining about how boring it looks, but thankfully I've got enough going on in the foreground to disguise it somewhat.
My aims for next chapter are to use less chibiness, sort out my atrocious anatomy and maybe have a little more actually HAPPEN. Plus I'm gonna continue with improving backgrounds and layout. Next chapter starts on the 15th, as always.
Edit: 2000 pageviews! Thanks guys! ^_^
Tantz_Aerine at 12:48PM, Sept. 9, 2007
Impressive colouring and background yet again! I really like the way they are ambling on ahead towards the car. Really well done :)
stabbyfairy at 9:26AM, Sept. 8, 2007
Nah, 's just Fyrinae being sleepy. Nuthin' to do with Bunting at all. XD
Sedated42 at 8:39AM, Sept. 8, 2007
"bwuh? wassa... Hng, wass?" is that another bunting quote? sounds like it shud be
subcultured at 5:36PM, Sept. 5, 2007
^_^
stabbyfairy at 5:54AM, Sept. 5, 2007
Hehe, a lot of people like that bit. (Well, a lot of people within my readers, so that's about 5 people overall. XD) The tan only really came about when I decided before I started that I should do a fanservice-y picture of Martin in just his boxers and thought 'hang on a minute, with an open-fronted coat and having spent 6 months hanging around in a desert (not a spoiler, it's just not been mentioned), shouldn't he have a freaky tan?' XD I ain't posting that picture 'cos it was done before any of Chapter 1 so it REALLY sucks. Besides, he shows [size=9]not nearly[/size] enough flesh as it is. >_>
yadiel at 6:31PM, Sept. 4, 2007
hahaha, may be. And I was able to read all the pages at once because it was great, thought I had to stop a few minutes when I reached the "Tan" XD I couldn't stop laughing
stabbyfairy at 4:20PM, Sept. 4, 2007
Yay, thank you very much! ^_^ I'm still ironing out the anatomy basics. That's why I spent so long practising hands and feet, because if you can do them people ignore other mistakes. At least, that's what I was hoping. XD
yadiel at 4:02PM, Sept. 4, 2007
XD hahah I read it all!!!!!! I loved it, the use of panels was a great improvement, I noticed here and there some mistakes in proportions, but look at whos telling that XD you solved my problem with drawing feet =P. Great work =D you got a new fan =P