Page 5
Ozoneocean on Dec. 12, 2006
Page description:
While Pinky broods on her sore hand, her disdain for her fellow crew members increases, especially since they carried on playing regardless of her pain as if nothing had happened! Her resentment increases until she is moved to take direct action; she grabs their cards and hurls them at Collin the driver, who is then woken from a light doze. This causes Collin to wake up momentarily and jerk one of the steering levers. The tank shifts course slightly but sharply, swinging everyone about and making Pinky whack her head painfully on some hard fittings. Tough luck Pinky!
Commentary:
Oh man, I'm going to cut back on quality now. Pinky TA shouldn't be such hard work to make… It's been a great project to work on, it's done a lot for me creatively, but it's not done much else for me: it's not really going anywhere or doing anything for me to justify what goes into it. I've though about only doing a few more pages and then finishing up with the written form of the current short story for those who're interested, but I think I'll continue now anyway; in a form that doesn't require so much time, (if I can manage it).
Extra:
I have two new pics in the fan art gallery! One from Lefarce of Lefarce (and numerous other comics here at DD), and the other from Ryan Glass of Short Bus Brothel! Ryan's pic is of a truly boobular Pinky in the style of The MAXX's Sam Kieth. Lefarce's pic is a hilarious illustration of a dream I posted in the forums here.
Responses to the comments on the last page will be posted there and responses to this page will be posted here.
lefarce at 3:35PM, Dec. 20, 2006
Ugh. Work has been kicking my ass. That and my comic/site have kept me from reading your updates D:. Anyway, now that I've finally gotten a chance, I have to say, it was well worth the anticipation and wait! Fantastic work, as always! Can't wait to see the next page, Ozone! By the way, panel six is awesome. The expression delightfully funny!
spaz at 12:42PM, Dec. 20, 2006
Karma.
CrazySOB at 10:34AM, Dec. 20, 2006
Getting a little cranky are we.
Aurora Moon at 7:04AM, Dec. 20, 2006
you know, you could just do lineart and put in the text too...that's if you don't have enough time to color it anymore. it still looks good in line art. :)
carrollhach at 6:46AM, Dec. 20, 2006
awesome strip!
Tommie Kelly at 4:11AM, Dec. 20, 2006
wow, this is fantastic, just added to my favourites!
Jenshin at 2:36AM, Dec. 20, 2006
Go Pinky!!
Tantz_Aerine at 2:25AM, Dec. 20, 2006
Looks really good, as always. And I understand your reasoning, and second it. Still, it's got too many interesting characters not to make a snazzy story with. ;)
Ozoneocean at 1:11AM, Dec. 20, 2006
[b]REPLIES[/b] -sheezus... I left it too long... [b]Zacticus[/b] - Thanks Zac! Ah, I'm glad the feeling carried through so perfectly ^_^ It sort of makes up for all the text I had to cut out. Funny how that works out! Hmm, Illustration is a bloody good idea. [b]Sarah[/b] - She did indeed, but she won't see it that way ;) [b]Sub[/b] - Thanks man. It's a bit crowded down there even for me. [b]Magical[/b] - Hahahahaha! [b]KAM[/b] - Thanks man ^^ [b]GLASS[/b] - HA! She's just so, so, so, SO BOOBTASTIC! [b]Bobo[/b] - Your pages have something bizarrly special all their own man! [b]EinKun[/b] - It's all tablet! No pencils, no pens... It still takes me longer, but it's neater and a lot more versatile! [b]Slimredninja[/b] - Hahahahahahaha, thanks man! [b]Whirlywind[/b] - Thanks Whirly. Ah, I stick lineart pics here when I'm falling behind... [b]hat[/b] - Thanks hat! I wish I were being paid for it though... [b]Sandy[/b] - Thanks Sandy! It's the time I spend on creating them that's the problem though: Lots of effort = not much but a nice looking page... :( [b]Lothar[/b] - Nawwww, just dopey tired... Heat and a wiff of carbon monoxide doesn't make for a nice mixture. Add that to a drunken night and you let yourself down badly, ^_^ [b]Mr Granger[/b] - I like the way you guys think! [b]Aurora[/b] - Hahahahaha! That's hillarious Aurora! [b]Silus[/b] - Thanks again Silus!!! -THANKS FOR THE ADD Hehe :p [b]Glass[/b] - OMG, you and Aurora whould make a good couple ^_^ [b]Jenshin[/b] - Awwwwww, sorry about that Jenshi. I wish I had your updating speed skills though ^_^ Seriously. These damn pages take far too long at the moment. [b]Phinmagic[/b] - Thanks Man! Thats lovely of you to say! I'll have to fave your nice green page too, that style looks cool! [b]MAZzzzzzzzzzooooo[/b] - Heh! Thanks Maz. Pinky's the only bad tempered on right now though... But that kind of thing does tend to be contagious! [b]Mr Mustard[/b] - Thanks Mr M! [b]Simon[/b] - She's pissed off all right. But not because of cheating ^_^ [b]Aeon Flux[/b] - Exactly! People can behave in the most fun ways to draw! Funnily enough people are easier to draw, but buildings and machines are easier to colour... [b]Madscott[/b] - Thanks Mad scott! They're not always that good though. [b]Spaz[/b] - Thanks Spaz! [b]Dracco[/b] - Ah! It's an interesting process, probably more fun to watch though than to actually do it. [b]Magical[/b] - Ha! I wish! Thanks man. [b]Tantz[/b] - Thanks Tantz, I love making Pinky's face angry!
Zac at 1:05AM, Dec. 20, 2006
O! This comic always looks so professional. You captured Pinky's feelings perfectly in it, I myself was feeling pretty frustrated will all the others in the tank, and the color scheme made me feel closed in and nauseous (in that good way that only amazing art can capture) Great work, I really hope you continue doing these comics, and if you do a short story...add illustrations...and comics ;)
SarahN at 12:09AM, Dec. 20, 2006
Acck...she caused herself more pain! -_O;
subcultured at 11:26PM, Dec. 19, 2006
hahaha great ambience
magicalmisfits at 10:50PM, Dec. 19, 2006
I will take what I can get!
Glass_Ink at 10:19PM, Dec. 19, 2006
There something about that fan art by Mr.Glass that really raises a tent!!! And I don't know why. I love the finally comic... Very cool.
bobo_81 at 9:24PM, Dec. 19, 2006
Still looks better than my finished comics :P
EinKun at 12:43PM, Dec. 19, 2006
Hmm HMmm Very nice, you ink this right? o.O Or was it a tablet? I don't remember XD
slimredninja at 11:42AM, Dec. 19, 2006
awsome stuff "the art is strong in this one"
Whirlwynd at 12:14AM, Dec. 18, 2006
^^() Interesting expressions - I don't think I've seen one of your pages with just the lineart. It still looks cool.
hat at 4:51PM, Dec. 17, 2006
This is Pro.
sandy at 10:46AM, Dec. 17, 2006
Honestly, there is NOTHING wrong with this comic. In fact, it's very well done if you ask me. If anyone's suffering from severe artists's block it's me.
lothar at 3:50PM, Dec. 16, 2006
i think the driver might be dead ! or close to it
MrGranger at 8:18AM, Dec. 15, 2006
Everyone has their mouth open...I think Aurora's got her hands around the right idea.
Aurora Moon at 6:16AM, Dec. 15, 2006
Glass ink: "I hate to say this, but the one panel looks something along the lines of someone jacking off." ARGH!! now you got me thinking dirty thoughts about this page! X_x;;
Glass_Ink at 11:13PM, Dec. 13, 2006
I hate to say this, but the one panel looks something along the lines of someone jacking off. I like the black and white style your got going here.
Jenshin at 9:53PM, Dec. 13, 2006
The only problem with unfinished pages is that I can't comment on the story or situation or other things I care about in comics until after it's done and I've forgotten about it until the next page, and then it's all irrelevant.