Page 9
Ozoneocean on Jan. 22, 2007
Page description:
Pinky gives her crew a bit of a telling off, they give HER a bit of a telling off in return, and then she tells them to try the radio. While Betty and Dave are busy, Pinky lets on to Collin a little something about her background… And then ALL of a sudden Betty and Dave are out of the tank again because they can't even work the radio. So Pinky climbs in to have a go, followed by Betty, on the way in she tears her pants open on the gun breech or something…
Commentary:
I really did forget how to colour here. I had to keep on redoing it until I was semi happy with it. And even then I simplified it in a lot of places. Ironically this was going to be a very simple page of talking heads but… I suppose I'm just not very good at this sort of thing or it wouldn't take so long. I'm very sorry for the delay. And for anyone who's confused- Betty is a woman, she's just one of those really big tough gals who can smash coconuts with their bare hands.
Extra:
HPK's Shoomfy has a cameo in here, see if you can find it! Learn about Shoomfy here.
Oh yeah, I did a really naughty fan art pic for Tea Green's really naughty and really funny comic LOVEMAGIC a while ago. Click on the name and look through the pages to find it, but be WARNED, it is NOT for young eyes, safe for work, virgins, priests or unmarried people bellow the age or 25! Ha! Well, maybe not that bad, but be warned ok?
Darwin at 5:08AM, Feb. 2, 2007
This looks good in color my friend! She certainly doesn't have qualms telling the others how she feels does she? HEE! Oh one little oopsie - you have the wrong "whether" in that first panel (Last dialogue bubble with Pinky speaking - you have weather.) ^_- Great page though I love to see the in work and finished copies! Looks awesome!
Nick at 4:41AM, Feb. 2, 2007
great as always, sir!
alejkhan at 4:30AM, Feb. 2, 2007
hmmm...that is very interesting tidbit of info on Pinky's background. Who da thunk it? I wonder if her parents are proper stuck up gentry....I bet her father smokes a pipe and wears a monocle....
magicalmisfits at 4:30AM, Feb. 2, 2007
great work as always
Tantz_Aerine at 4:28AM, Feb. 2, 2007
Still looks good. I like the dialogue here, too :) Waiting's not a problem.
Zac at 8:02PM, Jan. 30, 2007
I inked and colored your first panel for you if you need a head start. JERKFACE. (you're not a jerk). Sorry to hear about your swatches. They're tricky things
EinKun at 7:58AM, Jan. 28, 2007
I was a week late too Oze T_T don't worry I know how you feel everyday. XD Considering I update sooooo slowly. Oh and lookie another uncolored page! Wonders! ^^ Lookin' forward to your updates... now abt that fanart you made for Tea Greens *click* Meows for you~ good luck XD
Tommie Kelly at 5:55AM, Jan. 25, 2007
I agree it's cool to see it pre color!
slimredninja at 5:07PM, Jan. 24, 2007
nice to see your stuff precolor looks good
Zac at 7:39AM, Jan. 24, 2007
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mickasso at 2:00AM, Jan. 24, 2007
Uh oh. Someone's behind on their colors. O_o
I Hate Dirt at 7:48PM, Jan. 23, 2007
very cool. like the line work.
Ozoneocean at 6:19PM, Jan. 23, 2007
[u]Replies[/u] [b]Aurora[/b] - Ha, yeah! I like drawing her plaits, and without the big hair that she normally has, she's way easier to draw! [b]Mad-mazza![/b] - Hahaha, ya, I saw shmoofs in your page! He's a cute little fella. Thanks so much Maz ^^ [b]Joff[/b] - Thanks Joff, hopefully it won't take me too long! [b]Magical[/b] - Thanks a lot man! [b]Carrol[/b] - Thanks so much, hopefully the coloured version will look good too! [b]Nick[/b] - TY Nick! ^^ [b]Tantz[/b] - Thankyew^^ Yeah... I'm crap at simplicity... I... I was even going to make this page all just talking heads! But this way seemed to advance the story more. [b]Glass[/b] - Thanks Glass. :) [b]Darwin[/b] - Thanks Darwin, yeah, I really like to play with the prespective. Ah, I hope I havn't missed any of your pages! [b]Simon[/b] - Ah, there is no pencil process, that the secret. ;) It's all tablet work, start to finish. You'd probably call this an "ink" stage... I do about two rough sketchy layers in grey, and then a final clean grey layer; that's this one. [b]Sarah[/b] - Ah, it only looks like a sketch ;) In reality I'm as messy as everyone else! Hey you got first comment!
Aurora Moon at 6:08PM, Jan. 23, 2007
pinky looks so cute without the turban hat and the braids there. ^^
Mazoo at 3:45PM, Jan. 23, 2007
Shmoofy! I did a shmoofy cameo in my page too! I really like Pinky's Stance in the second panel-- so much attitude! The lineart looks especially good here, even more so than usual. Sweet job, ozone!
Joff at 3:23PM, Jan. 23, 2007
that looks really cool :) Can't wait to see it coloured
magicalmisfits at 11:39AM, Jan. 23, 2007
Pretty durn cool.
carrollhach at 5:32AM, Jan. 23, 2007
great
Nick at 4:41AM, Jan. 23, 2007
second panel looks rather nice, sir
Tantz_Aerine at 12:49AM, Jan. 23, 2007
I really like the fourth panel. So expressive, just as it is. I also have a suspicion you are a sucker for punishment. The pages are not getting any simpler, and you are still doggedly going on adding angles and such. I really like that, and am thoroughly enjoying the entire comic. Well done, and don't beat yourself up over delays. The line art rocks!
Darwin at 11:51PM, Jan. 22, 2007
And you have great perspective too, you are able to pull off those odd angles with little effort and make them look great! Hey thanks for your recent string of comments on OH...Perciate the feedback! LATER!
simonitro at 11:07PM, Jan. 22, 2007
Awesome... Got a question: What's your process to make the pencilized lines looks really clean?
SarahN at 10:16PM, Jan. 22, 2007
Your sketches look so clean. o.o