Part 7 page 8
Ozoneocean on Oct. 4, 2007
Page description:
Pinky climbs up the side of the Tromper (SSV6), gets in and looks out through the viewing prism at the fiery scene outside the palace windows.
Commentary:
This page was basically finished yesterday. Jebus, it was mostly done on Wednesday really, but I just lost all enthusiasm, got too tired and had too sleep a lot. It's a nice view of Pinky in the first panel, but I intended this page to be a quickie so that I could do two updates this week, unfortunately quickies always seem to be too boring to concentrate on, especially when you're tired. I like Pinky's dress there, but she'd have looked cool in her sexy gear in that pose. Bugger it!
Oh, and those Trompers are much like the SSV5 so far. Not too much of a stretch but some aspects of them will always cause problems. Grr. This story features them heavilly.
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Using the BCX button to see the colour version of this page without the messy text. Not much of a benefit really here since there's not much text anyway, but I like the votes! ^_^
And vote using the Top Web comics button to see how this looks in line art without the added colour. Ah, now in this one you do see a big change at lest- colour adds most of the detail.
Kittnn at 3:06PM, Oct. 4, 2008
Everything about this is just so well done.. The anatomy, the shading, the colouring, the angles, the muscles.. Very realistic, very beautiful
Brock at 3:39PM, Oct. 18, 2007
What a beautiful page this is. You have a way with color, my friend.
coinilius at 5:35PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Great first panel ;)
silus at 1:39PM, Oct. 16, 2007
Still getting better! Two awesome panels there...
heymelby at 3:39PM, Oct. 12, 2007
Hey ozone, congrate on being on top again (now if i can only get chads fat ass movin again) speaking of which great ass on this page, nice low angle shot, the anatomy looks damn good.
Nepath at 6:03AM, Oct. 11, 2007
Excellent page, love the camera choice for that main picture.
Ozoneocean at 8:32PM, Oct. 9, 2007
Thankyou everyone. ^_^ It's YOU guys who're best though. I love your comment, they keep me going. And I swear I'm going to return some of them soon! Ah, the next page will be late... maybe Friday? I found it hard to come up with the compositions for the next ones, but I have now and it should be good ^_^
fugli at 7:10PM, Oct. 9, 2007
This is just crazy good!
hartchamber at 4:52PM, Oct. 9, 2007
ooh! lovely coloring and good composition!
seanh at 4:55PM, Oct. 7, 2007
Low-angle loveliness.
FAL at 10:05AM, Oct. 7, 2007
I just love this page. it looks so clean! and shiny! Good job, man!
iagojester at 7:51AM, Oct. 7, 2007
Just how ~does~ that hat stay seated upon her noggin? I'm dying to know. I love the worm- view shot here. Very suggestive, and very well-rendered. But when is anything you draw to the contrary? Anyway, I've just finished catching up on the months I've been away. Glad to see you've put your nose to the grindstone- these past pages have been jewels! Keep it up, but don't burn yourself out!
jmt at 9:35PM, Oct. 5, 2007
I am pretty sure we are about to see some tromper mayhem. In America we would call this "Go Time!"
Nick at 8:13PM, Oct. 5, 2007
Well done. That first panel feels beyond real... awesome.
magicalmisfits at 7:03PM, Oct. 5, 2007
Cant wait!
SarahN at 6:33PM, Oct. 5, 2007
That big Pinky panel is very cool. Her arms look particularly real.
polo at 2:48PM, Oct. 5, 2007
Mez seez something so beautiful!
cresc at 2:08PM, Oct. 5, 2007
Pinky looks lovely in the first panel
junoblairb at 1:46PM, Oct. 5, 2007
Amazing shading on that first panel. The arm... can't stop looking at the arm! I look forward to the epic-ness of the next scene! :D
kyupol at 1:40PM, Oct. 5, 2007
first panel's cool
lothar at 1:38PM, Oct. 5, 2007
cool fire , and how she's all casual about it !
simonitro at 1:13PM, Oct. 5, 2007
I just "LOVE" this angle. For some reasons... he he he! Your machines art look so amazing on different directions. Pinky has a nice rack. :p
Neilsama at 11:59AM, Oct. 5, 2007
That first panel is a lovely angle!
DAJB at 10:25AM, Oct. 5, 2007
Hah - who [i]doesn't[/i] know how to pilot a tromper? Like riding a bicycle!
Tantz_Aerine at 9:52AM, Oct. 5, 2007
Actually I like her more with the dress, because it leaves more to the imagination ;)