Part 7 page 9
Ozoneocean on Oct. 16, 2007
Gah! Delay… T_T
Sorry guys, I should have started the next page earlier… It's just dull.
OK, here's a pic that's inspiring it at the moment. It's a silhouette of the US WW2 battleship Pennsylvania as she leads the American battle line into the greatest sea battle of modern times: Leyte Gulf.
This pic is awesome in the full version with the other ships behind, but still pretty cool here too. That thing is like a ziggurat, it's literally a floating fortress. The best part is the figure of a little tiny man, standing almost completely unsupported on a little platform on the starboard side. Really gives you a good idea of the scale.
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Page description:
They burst through the windows of the palace and out onto the street. Pinky tests out the Tromper's battle weapons as she clears a path to the sea. Coming suddenly upon a tank, she cracks it open with a well placed rocket, while Ace seems to be more focused on shooting up the buildings. Down at the canal Ace roasts a fleeing group of soldiers, to Pinky's dismay. And finally, they step over the side and into the water.
Commentary:
Two week delay on this one! I'm very sorry about that. There were a few reasons for it. My sister was visiting, I was feeling quite low about my work generally, and this page was quite difficult to visualize, since all the fancy action stuff that drives it AND defines most of the colouring and lighting wasn't going to go on until the very final stage, so it was tricky drawing and colouring a whole page around imaginary special effects. Hahahaha! But it DOES look better when it's done that way, even if it is harder. -putting mocked up effects in as placeholders doesn't achieve the same result in the end I find.
Vote
Using the BCX button to see the colour version of this page. I can't work out whether this one looks better without the text or not.
And vote using the Top Web comics button to see how this looks in line art without the added colour. This one is so bare bones it's ridiculous! But at least you see more detail in the case of the crispy troops.
+Fan Art!+
Priceman of Silvershot created this truly SASSY sexy momma of a Pinky for me as part of a larger group fan pic. Click the image bellow to visit his site and check it out! I'll add it to my fan art gallery as soon as I've had some sleep.
Hyptosis at 9:54AM, Oct. 29, 2007
Very cool ocean, you're the man! Well.. you're a man.. with a cool hat.... =\ Good job! =P >_>
SamGolden at 2:20PM, Oct. 28, 2007
the art is astounding
SamGolden at 2:20PM, Oct. 28, 2007
the art is astounding
SamGolden at 2:20PM, Oct. 28, 2007
awesome comiccc mannnnnn
SarahN at 11:16PM, Oct. 27, 2007
Mmm-mm! Fancy machinery.
Ozoneocean at 9:20PM, Oct. 23, 2007
Thankyou ^_^ ah, another short delay... I hope I can actually get this one finished pretty quickly though! As for questions about the first panel: that one was just the effect I wanted! It wasn't that hard either I drew a bunch of straight lines and duplicated them, rotating some on angles (for the window frames). When it came to colour all is simply orange monochrome because it's reflecting the firelight outside. The smashed window is simply opaque orange scribble over the top, keeping mostly within all the frames. ^_^
Zero7 at 4:10PM, Oct. 23, 2007
its a visual rape
JillyFoo at 9:28AM, Oct. 23, 2007
Once again I don't know what to say it all looks so good!
D0m at 4:44AM, Oct. 22, 2007
Quick update! Ooh, and first comment... This looks fantastic, Ozone. I love the smoldering fires around the explosions and every effect. Your world continues to take on a tangible quality every time I read.
lothar at 9:57AM, Oct. 21, 2007
YAAAAAAAARG !!!!! hellz yea !
jmt at 2:21PM, Oct. 18, 2007
better to flam them up now, then deal with them later when they might be better armed. That is what I would say.
silus at 1:06PM, Oct. 18, 2007
Burning people is okay.
Tantz_Aerine at 8:32AM, Oct. 18, 2007
That first panel is - wow, so impressive! I really need to know what you did to create such a great effect. I love the rest of the vistas as well, but the first panel still is the greatest one in my opinion.
polo at 7:53AM, Oct. 18, 2007
MACHINES ROCKS DAMN YOU!
DAJB at 11:44PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Heh - guess someone likes playing with fire, eh? Looks so cool too!
simonitro at 8:56PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Amazing action from panel to panel with high quality of art. Each panel is a piece of its own. Damn, your art never fails to amaze me. :O
iowabarbidoll at 8:33PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Beautiful page. No need to apologize for it taking a while either! ~B
junoblairb at 8:29PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Heh she's only saying that because it can shoot FIRE! XD
jgib99 at 7:19PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Amazing action. Your work is well worth the wait.
chrisj at 7:04PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Whoa! Flame Throwers at 20 paces! Great flow of action here.
Nick at 6:57PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Sir, you always do such a great job. Keep your head up and get out of the funk! :)
Hawk at 6:41PM, Oct. 17, 2007
The color scheme you have going here is pretty neat.
kyupol at 6:26PM, Oct. 17, 2007
cool mech fight scene.
fugli at 6:13PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Amazing!
n_y_japlander at 6:10PM, Oct. 17, 2007
(OO)