32. Hurt in Confusion
SmartSpriter on Aug. 7, 2007
Kyle's plan goes into action. His clever battle tactic has turned the matchup around, but is Machop down and out, or does Alex have one last trick up his sleeve?
Remember, there's an update this Friday. I'm gonna continue to experiment with future text bubbles. I'll put up a sample either Friday or Monday.
So far Alex is winning. Anyone wanna vote for who they think wins?
SmartSpriter at 7:55PM, Aug. 8, 2007
That probably has something to do witht he fact he is so smart. And I'm just gonna say...keep reading to see what happens.
G Xon at 5:57PM, Aug. 8, 2007
I love this comic but I hate Alex. He talks too much and thinks he's so smart. I can't wait for Kyle to cream him and finally shut him up.
SmartSpriter at 2:54PM, Aug. 8, 2007
Jeffy meh boy: Yeah, I've noticed they think too much. And honestly, I've cut down on some of the dialouge/thinking I originally ahd going on. I'm talking text in panels 4 and 5. But, I'm the kind of person who likes to explain everything that happens in the battle, like an episode of Naruto or something. I need better judgement on what will need explaining and what you guys can get on your own during a fight scene. I'll work on it. Justin: And Dented keeps saying that these are awesome and that readers such as yourself will hate me making new, updated versions. I am totally confuzzled. I'll have the text bubble examples up on Monday. I'll show you guys some logos on Friday. The fictional logo for Cyro Corp. and the title "Pokemon Survival" with Pokemon font and some color. Good time fun, eh?
jef dam5 at 1:32PM, Aug. 8, 2007
I'm glad you interpreted some realism in the battle. I still think they think too much, I still think y4 should tot4lly write a b00k. With added l33tn3ss for added understanding.
sessy6 at 1:25PM, Aug. 8, 2007
I like the 5th panel.. (Machop)
yoshirider4 at 1:20PM, Aug. 8, 2007
The motion blurs are good. Work on the text bubbles though.
SmartSpriter at 7:21AM, Aug. 8, 2007
I wasn't sure if it was TOO much motion blur.
G Xon at 6:55AM, Aug. 8, 2007
Nice page, the motion effects in panels 5-7 look great.