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json on Oct. 2, 2008
json…..what the f**k are you doing?
i'm rushing ahead. you win, and i win.
i'm going to be uploading the pages from the first chapter as fast as i can ink them!!! YAY!!!!…..or BOOO!!!! choose your side.
i had originally wanted to do “a page a day” kind of comic, but then i realized i should just get to the good stuff faster…..but still tell the story. seeing as how i'm just redrawing old plot anyway……………..
if you're lost, scroll back. i'm gonna try to knock out this first chapter in a week.
as for this page, this is karen. jeff's love interest. she's a young girl who loves boys…but doesn't like jeff. half of this page is final pencils and the other half is inked. i'm just being honest. i'm wanting to breeze through this early chapter, so bare with me.
that said……chapter 2 is going to have a lot of parodies to old comic book ads. so, don't be surprised to see silly fake mail order ads in place of regular pages. if you have any ideas for ads and non-story pages that use to exist in old comics, let me know. if you always thought x-ray mail order specs were lame and you wanted cyclops style x-MEN specs………or instead of spider-man and captain crunch fighting cavities you wanted to see venom eatting spider-man and the cavities……let me know. i'll make it happen!
Jason of Powerjeff at 7:10PM, Oct. 3, 2008
This looks really good. Huge improvement. Panel 5 is my favorite with Jeff's 'Aw, shucks!' reaction. You managed to capture the exact mood of the original, without the substandard artwork. Don't forget about Toad from Super Mario Brothers!
Bocaj at 12:52PM, Oct. 3, 2008
Lawl!