Chapter 01 Page 10
silentkitty on Jan. 25, 2007
*-* Oh my goodness, that feature was completely unexpected lol. Um.. hello everyone! Glad to have you on board! =3 I thought I'd take a sec to answer a couple of general questions that got asked on the last page:
- Their clothes: They're not wearing prison uniforms. ;) They got to change their clothes to their preference when they chose their five items.
- Nope, this isn't my first comic, I do pencil and ink work for another web comic called Farlight Saga. However, this is my first venture into writing, lettering, and coloring comics.
- “Death in the tower is absolute” - will be explained later along with Cai's shoulder-eyeball, I promise. ;)
Anyway, this page pretty much almost killed me lol. If there's one thing this comic is teaching me, it's that I am never going to want to see the color green again after this arc is over. And yeah. That's about as excited as you'll see Margensen get for about four chapters. :P
CryForE at 12:19PM, April 8, 2009
Makes you wonder if bushes & trees are alive, hence they stand tightly around the edge of cliffs, then when someone throttles through, they laugh at 'em while they're falling down ^^ Also this Margensen seems very calm :P
Reitei at 9:24PM, Aug. 1, 2008
I like margensen more and more.
katyas at 9:57AM, June 1, 2008
Great panel with her foot on the edge of the precipice and the river SO TINY, so FAR BELOW ... and then her taking a LONG step OFF the edge of the cliff, and her tail STRAIGHT OUT BEHIND HER .... now THAT'S caaaawmaawdy
Amelius at 9:52AM, Jan. 10, 2008
Le gaspe, she said a naughty word! Haha, for a lady with 3 eyes she certainly doesn't look where she is going. I like the irony ^_^
barking_frog at 6:05AM, Oct. 17, 2007
Tell the truth -- you just got lazy and didn't want to draw the ground anymore.
simonitro at 12:20PM, Sept. 22, 2007
This reminded me of a Bugs Bunny cartoon! Miss Cai is so talkative!
Hit_Rock Aqtrox at 7:57AM, Aug. 10, 2007
weeee plums splash "hiting water surface"
Foxy at 9:31AM, June 7, 2007
I could tell it was going to happen by looking at the fourth pannel~ Jeez, he should've pulled her back or something...
littlebeast at 4:42PM, May 23, 2007
Three eyes and she didn't notice the cliff... lol
EinKun at 7:41AM, Jan. 28, 2007
Hahaha I know what you mean about the green color. My first comic in DD was in color, most of it took part in the wild. That green was very annoying(which is why I do black n white now). Oh and hello newcommer, welcome to DD. XD And I say, marvelous artwork indeed. This is what I "tried" to do in the past, but failed miserably. Extra Meows for you~~~ ^^v
anonymous at 6:27AM, Jan. 28, 2007
This pleases my eyes. Fav'd
Morgaine at 5:19AM, Jan. 28, 2007
I'm liking this comic. I'm definitely going to keep reading it :)
mishi_hime at 4:48PM, Jan. 27, 2007
this is great so far. i like it :)
worth at 11:48AM, Jan. 27, 2007
The last panel is beautifully rendered.
F_Allen at 10:42AM, Jan. 27, 2007
really nice art
psychosis at 9:43PM, Jan. 26, 2007
I have decided that, so far, Margensen is my favorite character. Yeah. So good. XD
Shingo at 2:44PM, Jan. 26, 2007
Yay, an update. Keep it up silentkitty.
silentkitty at 1:56PM, Jan. 26, 2007
HAHA.
beastmaster at 1:51PM, Jan. 26, 2007
Cai, Cai, Cai of the jungle, watch out for that cliff!
deleted-byrequest-03 at 12:57PM, Jan. 26, 2007
Ooo! Cliff fun :D You may as well call this a CLIFF HANGER!!! AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! Gack... sorry... bad pun :D
Rina_ran at 11:17AM, Jan. 26, 2007
I just realized she had an eyeball on her shoulder. Neat character design. Can she actually see out of it or is it like a parasite of some sort? Maybe she'll land somewhere soft...yeah. Soft... I really like the way her feet look. Random yes...but I do. Along with her sandal's design. ^_^ Definately not saying anything about copying, especially since it's happening first in your comic (and mine will have both scenes happen in the next 2 updates). But my story has two exact things that happen as they have here. The door dissapearing and now someone stepping off a cliff. lol
Eviltwinpixie at 11:11AM, Jan. 26, 2007
Wow. Completely wow. ^_^ The art is some of the best I've seen, and the story seems very strong too, at this early stage. Faving this. ^_^
XeaRi at 10:54AM, Jan. 26, 2007
Wow, cool stuff! I wish I could draw hands and feet like that... among other things. And I love the little crab... thing... next to the word "comments."
X Daggers at 10:51AM, Jan. 26, 2007
LOL! She really needs to start listening to him. With 3 eyes you think she would've seen that :P Anyway, great comic! It's only a few pages but so far its very interesting.
Mutation at 9:37AM, Jan. 26, 2007
Holy cow! I didn't notice she had an eyeball in her shoulder. O.o Anyway, for your first completely by yourself comic, It's really good.