Purgatory Tower

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Chapter 01 Page 16

silentkitty on Feb. 23, 2007

It's sky! It's real blue sky! The fact that I got to use a color other than green is the most exciting part about this page for me. =D. This page gave me so many issues, I really, really never want to see it again. Oi.

Assuming everything updates correctly (oh how I distrust these automatic updaters) there should be a new sketch of Aisha available as a TWC vote incentive.

Also, in the forum, there's an opinion question for those of you that don't mind reading semi-minor spoilers and would like some input into the style the series will have in the upcoming chapters.

And.. that's it! =D

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CryForE at 2:27PM, April 9, 2009

Say it enough times and it WILL happen! :P lol

katyas at 9:49AM, June 2, 2008

The sky looks cloudy - all full of fluffy cumulo-nimbus clouds ... is a storm getting ready to break? I'm sure that would make everyone SO much happier with their situation ... Heh. Very cute use of the panels and frames to create the story on this page. Me likee :-)

Amelius at 10:20AM, Jan. 10, 2008

That's cool how you layer the panels like so, I'd be bothered covering up all the art I did in them.

ArtMonk at 12:27PM, Nov. 8, 2007

very cool squince

simonitro at 12:45PM, Sept. 22, 2007

Very nice angles of the action sequences while the background are so nice! That lizard monster thing isn't quitting anytime soon! I have a feeling that it will jump!

TheMidge28 at 11:50AM, Aug. 8, 2007

nice layout here...great movement and pacing...I like the thought cloud of please don't jump repeated over and over....

F_Allen at 11:56AM, March 2, 2007

really gripping

timlight at 7:25AM, March 2, 2007

jump around ^^

lord pumpernickles at 8:14PM, March 1, 2007

ITS GONNA CATCH HER AND KILLLLLLL HER BWHAHAHAHAHA Amazing art by the way ^^

NekkoXIII at 10:39AM, March 1, 2007

this looks really great so far.

hs5k at 3:03PM, Feb. 27, 2007

Monster: "No don't jump! Oh great... there goes lunch... again." Great action sequance in this page. I hope she lands on her feet. XD

Shingo at 11:40AM, Feb. 27, 2007

I missed this update!? How dare I!? -smack'd- I love your backgrounds.

cameron11691 at 10:41PM, Feb. 26, 2007

the artwork is breathtaking! too awesome ^^

Rina_ran at 8:56AM, Feb. 26, 2007

But the green is so pretty! lol, j/k. I know how you must feel...using too much of one color can make you go cross eyed after awhile. I normally have that problem with blue. Love the different views of the forest we get to see. You can really see how lush and beautiful it is. Your ability to use colors is awesome. ^_^ Well now...will the creature jump? dun dun dun.

ian_feverdream at 8:33AM, Feb. 26, 2007

A technique that works for me, when I do non-traditional layouts like this page, I'd move the 5th panel to the right a bit, make it narrower, so it didn't line up with the first panel above it. For me, indenting it means it's after the first panel. It flows better. Sharing the same vertical line, there is some ambiguity, not sure if the eye is to go right or down. And I'd probably let the last panel stick out a bit to the right, like the second panel does, to make the last panel obviously above the 3rd and 4th panels.

adobedragon at 2:07PM, Feb. 25, 2007

Great writing; wonderful art.

barbwired at 1:35PM, Feb. 25, 2007

i must know how u color! gah its beautiful :') so pwerful! amazing

rana at 12:48PM, Feb. 25, 2007

OOOOOOOOOOOO nice color job

ian_feverdream at 8:43AM, Feb. 25, 2007

Nice layout with the overlapping panels. Nice Jump. I strangely like your rocks. You missed a chance to show flow, by showing the top of Aisha head in the top right panel. I don't know what you are complaining about the green for, you also got to use brown and tan.(grin)