Chapter 01 Page 18
silentkitty on March 7, 2007
I feel that the dialogue really carries this page. It took me hours to write, as you can probably tell.
*cough*
Anyway, say hello to the rest of Orun, and Veyra. =D
Also, voting incentive is updated! It's a huge page fulll of concept sketches that I'm too lazy to chop up and submit individually, so you get them all at once. =D
(Does this page look dark to anyone else? It looked fine on my home computer, but I looked at it somewhere else and it seemed to be a little bit dark. D:)
CryForE at 2:37PM, April 9, 2009
Presuming that Veyra's height is average, that makes Orun really big & tall, and Aisha low (even considering she's bending a bit in her knees) ^^
katyas at 10:09AM, June 2, 2008
Cool page - good job showing Aisha's fear/intimidation. Although - those look more like antelope horns than horns from any type of cattle I've seen - most cattle horns tend to grow more from the side of the head and curve up a bit as they grow. Grew up on a cattle ranch, so *shrug*
Amelius at 10:24AM, Jan. 10, 2008
You've got a knack for unique character designs, bravo!
ArtMonk at 12:39PM, Nov. 8, 2007
the dailog says it all Awsome page
simonitro at 12:52PM, Sept. 22, 2007
Yikes! I liked how her ears folded backwards indicating her intimidation!
Hyptosis at 9:35AM, July 30, 2007
lol, such a gorgeous page ^_^
anonymous at 9:31PM, July 27, 2007
D: just had to say, that orun was wearing a different coloured shirt in the first few pages! sorry, I nit-pick a bit. wonderful page still.
treebobber at 10:26PM, March 10, 2007
Beautiful storytelling and rich colors as usual! The new characters have a cool look!
Ozoneocean at 7:45PM, March 10, 2007
Such a massive fellow. They make a lovely matching couple really.
Zander at 12:49PM, March 9, 2007
don't harm her thats not cool
ian_feverdream at 12:04PM, March 9, 2007
One of the things I like about this comic is the extra textures in the colors. Like the spots on Aisha's tail and the stripes on the pants or the Dr. Strange dots on Veyra's arms and leggings or the variegated greens of the foliage
Friedenmann at 9:41AM, March 9, 2007
Don't you think Veyra should have bigger hands?
Kristen Gudsnuk at 8:53AM, March 9, 2007
au contraire, I think the page looks nice and bright. and jungly. ^_^ ooh these people don't look all that scary, though (more confused than anything else)! yay! (no more frantic running!) great page~ wohoo can't wait for more! as far as the dialogue, sometimes more is less, right?
Evil_Snuffkin at 6:43AM, March 9, 2007
That guy is kinda scary *shiver*
RoronoaZoro at 5:01AM, March 9, 2007
Nice!
Tantz_Aerine at 2:00AM, March 9, 2007
I like these two!
reconjsh at 11:14PM, March 8, 2007
I love the art for this comic.
timlight at 8:14PM, March 8, 2007
outstanding art & cast
acadia at 8:12PM, March 8, 2007
It looks dark because the sky is a considerably darker shade of blue than the previous pages. Great character designs on the new characters!
Kalira at 7:22PM, March 8, 2007
Looks great too me, certainly not too dark.
mrguy08 at 6:50PM, March 8, 2007
Not really.
SylentRain at 6:05PM, March 8, 2007
Not dark at all. -Must wait for next one-
Daemon at 4:42PM, March 8, 2007
doesn't look dark to me at all. Some times different screens make things look strange. Exspecially laptops. WONDERFUL WORK! kee hee
DJLink at 3:37PM, March 8, 2007
Just got here and dont know whats going on but me likes
Rubygem at 3:23PM, March 8, 2007
meep