Chapter 01 Page 18
silentkitty on March 7, 2007
I feel that the dialogue really carries this page. It took me hours to write, as you can probably tell.
*cough*
Anyway, say hello to the rest of Orun, and Veyra. =D
Also, voting incentive is updated! It's a huge page fulll of concept sketches that I'm too lazy to chop up and submit individually, so you get them all at once. =D
(Does this page look dark to anyone else? It looked fine on my home computer, but I looked at it somewhere else and it seemed to be a little bit dark. D:)
NekkoXIII at 2:46PM, March 8, 2007
i think "oh boy" says it all
Darwin at 2:10PM, March 8, 2007
Cool! Dude is pretty big there! Lovely page as usual!
Rydel6 at 1:02PM, March 8, 2007
You're so good with the details you put into everything.
Azaeziel at 12:49PM, March 8, 2007
A real 'meeting of the minds' there. heheh... Orun and Veyra's faces look very similar, almost as if they were related. Is this on purpose, or just a trick of the way they are standing together and were drawn that way?
MetroidMaster at 12:31PM, March 8, 2007
Cool. Two more main characters have revealed themselves.
Custard Trout at 12:25PM, March 8, 2007
They look friendly.
kingv at 12:22PM, March 8, 2007
I'm not sure if i'd be more afraid of them or the guy that's chasing her. ^^
EmilyTheStrange at 12:15PM, March 8, 2007
They're... not two people I'd want to run into in a dark alley... or a jungle. D:
anonymous at 11:37AM, March 8, 2007
I'm sure it took a reeeaaally long time to make these dialogs. Keep like this, you're awesome.