Chapter 01 Page 21
silentkitty on March 23, 2007
Oh man. Sorry this page is a bit late. This is actually version 3 of it, and I'm still not very happy with it, but it was time to bite the bullet and move on. :D
Vote incentive for this week is the inks to this page. Because I didn't get a chance to scan sketches in. I fail. Dx *sob*
CryForE at 2:49PM, April 9, 2009
She's right, she should have fled :S
katyas at 7:18PM, June 3, 2008
Wow - great use of motion and frames to show this sequence of action! Poor Aisha!
Amelius at 10:34AM, Jan. 10, 2008
Ouch, talk about a bad move!
TheMidge28 at 11:55AM, Aug. 8, 2007
great action sequence...slowed pace allows for the reader to really appreciate her defeat...good job.
subcultured at 2:27PM, March 31, 2007
wow ass handed outright
booger at 8:48PM, March 30, 2007
lookin good!!
GreatScottComix at 7:44PM, March 29, 2007
I have never been one for furries but this time, I make an exception. This is so well done. The art is good, not fantastic but pretty damn good. Its the colors that really make it POP!! I love it. I eagerly await the next page. Scott
Evil_Snuffkin at 2:47PM, March 26, 2007
Uh oh, seems she's pretty out matched ^_^'
timlight at 12:13PM, March 26, 2007
so super!
Rina_ran at 11:55AM, March 26, 2007
Whoa, she's so playing with her. o.o She wants to just deprive her of her weapons then strain this out. Least that's what I sense since she could of easily stabbed Aisha there instead of slugging her. Ow ow ow... Your fighting scenes look awesome and painful. LOVE the blood. ^_^ Fantasti work silentkitty. Have a good week. *hugs*
Azaeziel at 8:59AM, March 26, 2007
Ouch, well, no more daggers, but at least she tried to stand up for herself, and that's gotta count for something. Love it as always. Just can't say enough good things about your backgrounds.
Deviant Lynx at 5:04AM, March 26, 2007
lol I knew she was going to use those daggers...and I ponder if the jewel on her neck is of any relation to the ones on the dagger ends...but then again you all just ignore me. I'm way too observant and might spoil the story with my close to accurate guessing and give the author and artist too many ideas. lol. Still great she used the daggers though >.>;;; *shifty looks*
DiEgo at 10:21PM, March 25, 2007
Yeah, ditto on the first two panels. I usually find that making two similar panels back to back with very little happening in between always looks weird. It takes a rapid, dynamic moment and breaks it up into two still frames. A change in camera angle in the two troublesome panels should fix it up in the future. Otherwise, great flow and I love the directionality towards the bottom right in the last panel, with Aisha falling out of frame and all. And, with ol' blood swordy there, she is a bit robotic. It would be pretty cool if she, or other characters in the future, kinda look like they're dancing when fighting, if you know what I mean. But I guess the whole point here was to show how easy it was for the big brute. Aisha needs a big ol' sympathy sandwich, stat.
Shikiro at 9:28PM, March 25, 2007
as always, this comic roks! for a lil constuctive crit though, with the two panels at the top showing the daggers being pulled out, i think that veyra looks a lil bit too stiff, and Aisha looks slightly of balance, like shes about to fall forward. all the other frames ROCK though! keep it up! ^^
gigatwo at 5:31PM, March 25, 2007
pwnt
Zander at 12:21PM, March 25, 2007
kick her in the head as you go down
Ozoneocean at 12:16PM, March 25, 2007
Wow, the action's pretty hardcore. She really got owned in the fight didn't she? Poor gal... Love the way your draw figures!
lord pumpernickles at 8:40AM, March 25, 2007
Best page yet ^_^
lord pumpernickles at 8:40AM, March 25, 2007
Best page yet ^_^
Ibkod at 6:38AM, March 25, 2007
pain.. that gotta hurt.. love the blood in the first panel, wish I could draw like that.. *jealous* also impressed how she manages to actually get herself into all this mess... Lol the bad day continues x]
edgarallanpoo at 10:51PM, March 24, 2007
THAT'S gonna leave a mark. :-O Fantastic page once again, my friend! Dwight L. MacPherson
Kristen Gudsnuk at 9:12PM, March 24, 2007
OH NOES!! (omg I love how office zone called aisha squirrelly... ) maybe kai and margensen can save her!! (I like that guy.. and he has powers... so..?)
Office_Zone at 8:12PM, March 24, 2007
Ahg! SQUIRRELLY! RUN!!!
jiminycricketX at 7:55PM, March 24, 2007
Ouch...
xkyuketsuki at 7:52PM, March 24, 2007
tisk tisk...don't give that crazy girl a reason to kick your ass