Page Two
Ladyknight17 on Dec. 21, 2006
I loved the image of the main character May in this one. Just the way her long frame borders the panels. So happy….
(This note add later)
Okay…so as you can see I'm slowly changing the pages. Adding borders, fixing the text, and editing the spelling and grammar errors. But it's going to take me a while to get them all done. But hopefully it'll help the comic flow better.
Bye. Thanks to all my readers.
blntmaker at 7:05AM, Jan. 5, 2008
Great layout! Love how her body stretches across each panel! Beautiful! I too enjoy those feet!
kyupol at 7:58PM, Sept. 2, 2007
Id start selling my body if I was her... :)
irrevenant at 1:53AM, Aug. 5, 2007
You've put so much effort into the artwork it's a shame to mar it with typos (eles->else). If you plug the text into MS Word first, it'll do a basic spelling and grammar check for you.
Lit_Munkey at 11:16AM, July 8, 2007
nice feet!!!!!
ingrid_nini at 3:03PM, Dec. 23, 2006
some times I feel that way...lol