Page Three
Ladyknight17 on Dec. 22, 2006
Okay…I finally have a big girl editing system. But I'm still learning to use it. This is the first page I've used it on. Once I figure out how to use it I'm going to try to start doing the Chapter pages in color. We'll see how that goes…but I can't make any promises.
*updated note: This is another page I had to go back and fix. You can tell by the comments…it needed some work. Plus it let me go back and
add more to the story telling.
This page I both liked and disliked. I liked seeing the cafe, and the layout of the panels.
But…I felt…feel…like it needs more. I don't. know. Bye.
blntmaker at 7:07AM, Jan. 5, 2008
Looks like your fans arer going over your typos with a fine tooth comb - That's cool...Boy have I been there. So excited to get the page up, I ALWAYS shunned a third look at my page - still, the art work is gorgeous! I like that microphone.
kyupol at 7:58PM, Sept. 2, 2007
"angst"
irrevenant at 2:06AM, Aug. 5, 2007
Again awesome art marred by multiple typos: * "Which it happens to be..."->"...which happens to be...". * "agnst"->"angst" * "The jobs not bad"->"The job's not bad". * "were I work"->"where I work" Plugging the text into MS Word will give a basic spelling and grammar check, but having someone with a keen eye look it over would be even better. (MS Word detects that there's something hinky with the last two, but suggests the wrong solution). I like your style - it's not quite like anything else I've seen.
Lit_Munkey at 11:18AM, July 8, 2007
neat deal with the opposeing views
skyangel at 3:38PM, July 7, 2007
I like your directing and the story is engrossing
Ladyknight17 at 4:09AM, Dec. 24, 2006
Thank you!! I'm happy to have people reading it!
ingrid_nini at 3:04PM, Dec. 23, 2006
Hey, you are good! XD Love your art!