Rival Angels

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Page 005- Movin' on up

albone on Dec. 16, 2007

Change can be a scary thing, especially if your goals are on the other side of the change.

I think Vero did a very cool job on the colors. :D

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katyas at 5:39AM, June 15, 2008

What is a "kayfabe" world??

sewerman at 10:28PM, April 30, 2008

So, this comic takes place in a kayfabe world? Interesting...

Largominus2004 at 11:37AM, Dec. 20, 2007

I like your comic a lot! Nothing better than wrestling ladies and locker rooms ^^ Thanks for the forum advise Albone!

carly_mizzou at 11:52AM, Dec. 19, 2007

Wow your art looks very professional. i also like the unique story concept. I'm going to keep an eye on this!

albone at 8:31AM, Dec. 19, 2007

Thanks again for the great comments. alanajoli, I really appreciate the comments about Sabrina and her development. :D

alanajoli at 11:35AM, Dec. 18, 2007

For a pro-wrestler, she's got a very modest look, and I think that already says loads about her. Great character development in a short number of pages, and great interplay between the art and dialogue/voice overs. I'm looking forward to seeing more!

blakechen at 1:57AM, Dec. 18, 2007

Shower scene. Woo hoo! Can't wait...

albone at 8:29AM, Dec. 17, 2007

Thanks everyone for the cool comments! Kyupol, yeah I sort of wish I could have that one back. What I've started doing is getting a model for those rough angles, to help out. Good eye and thanks for your understanding! :P Midge, why yes there IS a shower scene coming...

kyupol at 7:47AM, Dec. 17, 2007

crit: in 2nd panel, the foreshortening looks a little awkward. But then again thats a difficult angle to draw. :(

joeyjarin at 6:47AM, Dec. 17, 2007

awesome page. i really, really like the coloring, and of course the story moves along very well.

TheMidge28 at 4:52AM, Dec. 17, 2007

superb page...um...shower scene?

n_y_japlander at 12:51AM, Dec. 17, 2007

(^O^)