Seeing as you're back to upating, I'll tell you what I think about your work.
I agree with Doklor, it's annoying and confusing to have ALL the text in the same bubble. Make more panels of them doing stuff so the conversation can flow normally.
And I'll gladly give you a full review of this comic if you give me some contact info. But if you don't want it, I can keep on giving out advice thru the comment box. ^_^
Zeke5 at 12:45PM, May 4, 2006
Mk, but the change in text bubbles will be in the next chapter
Xergrim at 10:43PM, April 29, 2006
Seeing as you're back to upating, I'll tell you what I think about your work. I agree with Doklor, it's annoying and confusing to have ALL the text in the same bubble. Make more panels of them doing stuff so the conversation can flow normally. And I'll gladly give you a full review of this comic if you give me some contact info. But if you don't want it, I can keep on giving out advice thru the comment box. ^_^
Doklor567 at 3:34PM, April 29, 2006
Dude, dont put all your text in the same speech bubble its very confusing