look at my comic (demon sword) that is my first real comc! I am on page 6! and yet mine looks 10 times beter than yourse I have fan base you have jak(no offence) this is getting worse and worse qualitie over quantitie plz!
Grammar!
Punctuation!
Speech bubbles!
Plot!
All of these are things that you need to improve on. For example, there's no need for that ridiculous line of exclamation points. Bigger text and one, MAYBE two, exclamation points, will get the point across better, and avoid people making fun of you.
Other than that, there's plenty of tutorials on how to make speech bubbles in MS Paint, and a quick consultation of any third-grader will teach you all you need to know about capital letters and where to put them, and enlighten you on the use of the apostrophe.
And then we can discuss the difference between "funny" and "stupid"!
chaosflame24 at 6:31PM, Oct. 19, 2006
You have jak. XD
soonmme at 8:23PM, Oct. 18, 2006
look at my comic (demon sword) that is my first real comc! I am on page 6! and yet mine looks 10 times beter than yourse I have fan base you have jak(no offence) this is getting worse and worse qualitie over quantitie plz!
Jak0070 at 8:43PM, Oct. 17, 2006
lol XD
Scorchgofer at 8:01PM, Oct. 17, 2006
You updated like 19 comics in ten minutes. I usually update once a day, if at all, or unless I'm bored.
The_Jaded_Falcon at 7:55PM, Oct. 17, 2006
Grammar! Punctuation! Speech bubbles! Plot! All of these are things that you need to improve on. For example, there's no need for that ridiculous line of exclamation points. Bigger text and one, MAYBE two, exclamation points, will get the point across better, and avoid people making fun of you. Other than that, there's plenty of tutorials on how to make speech bubbles in MS Paint, and a quick consultation of any third-grader will teach you all you need to know about capital letters and where to put them, and enlighten you on the use of the apostrophe. And then we can discuss the difference between "funny" and "stupid"!