Ch. 1 - Pg. 1
KimLuster on Nov. 29, 2017
Alright, first actual page of my online illustrated novel.
As I mentioned before, every once in a while you'll run across strange words - that's my attempt to portray snippets of the language that developed in this world. I'll try hard to make it possible to glean their meanings from the surrounding text, but if needed, there's a GLOSSARY over there to the left, in my Miscellaneous Links. It's got a few entries in it, and every time I introduce a new strange word, it'll be added there as well…
Whelp! Hope this is interesting enough that you all hang around…!
Life and Good Dreams!
Peipei at 1:02AM, Dec. 1, 2017
This is absolutely gorgeous! Her body's positioning is very realistic, nice work! :D
KimLuster at 6:09AM, Dec. 1, 2017
Thank you, P!! :D
plymayer at 10:32PM, Nov. 29, 2017
A new day begins. A new story begins.
KimLuster at 4:29AM, Nov. 30, 2017
Poetry!
El Cid at 3:26PM, Nov. 29, 2017
Ah, so many mysteries this new world offers! So far, I've mostly been able to decipher the new vocab with context clues... and really it's more fun to guess!
KimLuster at 5:53PM, Nov. 29, 2017
The mysteries run deep... That's good you could figure them out from the context! I wanted that to be possible without having to reference a glossary (but still gonna have one...)
fallopiancrusader at 10:43AM, Nov. 29, 2017
The aesthetic reminds me a little bit of the late, great "The Cull"
KimLuster at 2:21PM, Nov. 29, 2017
I love Singring's style!! Garsh! I hope I haven't subconsciously copied it (to my abilities limit ;)). Nah, we won't have near the body mods and piercings here... At least purposefully done! ;)
Jason Moon at 8:47AM, Nov. 29, 2017
I like this set-up. Reminds me of the RPG's I use to play
Jason Moon at 9:58PM, Nov. 30, 2017
I think Glorantha came out in 75, in the 90's playstation started making adventure RPG games and "Legend of Dragoon" is one of those gems. Getting a little bit of a Dragoon vibe here. Very cool
KimLuster at 2:19PM, Nov. 29, 2017
Thanks! I've played a few RPGs back in the day - which ones does it most remind you of? I remember reading about one called Glorantha (never played) but the world was fascinating...!
Banes at 8:09AM, Nov. 29, 2017
And entice it surely will! Excellent opener! Cool idea to have an evolving glossary as well!
KimLuster at 2:13PM, Nov. 29, 2017
Thanks! Yeah, I figure it's the least I can do if I'm gonna throw out crazy words here and there !
fallopiancrusader at 6:46AM, Nov. 29, 2017
I love her symbiotic outfit. I want one too!
KimLuster at 2:11PM, Nov. 29, 2017
Hehe me too!
bravo1102 at 5:03AM, Nov. 29, 2017
What a rich and strange new world. Symbiosis seems very pervasive.
KimLuster at 2:11PM, Nov. 29, 2017
An offshoot of the metaphysical realization that everything is connected... or sumthin' :D