Ch. 1 - Pg. 6
KimLuster on Dec. 14, 2017
Sister Rhone and her saar (bond-mate, partner, companion…)
Clearly Rhiaan doesn't think much of Rhone's decision to go live in the cliffs… On that note, I sorta think if I'm gonna describe the cliffs like ‘like ticks on a hairless trog’, I probably should have depicted them in the background in the illustration here… Oh well - not changing it now!!
The walk to Rhone's probably took a couple hours. Not far at all, and Rhiaan still hadn't seen her in a while….hrrrmmm…
Life and Good Dreams
Peipei at 11:14PM, Dec. 18, 2017
Gorgeous page!
plymayer at 10:08PM, Dec. 14, 2017
Nice.
KimLuster at 4:47AM, Dec. 15, 2017
:)
El Cid at 9:01PM, Dec. 14, 2017
In a world without technology and high speed transportation, it makes sense that you'd want intermarriage across geographical regions to prevent inbreeding.
KimLuster at 4:46AM, Dec. 15, 2017
Very true, especially if the available gene pool got reduced by vast eco-palypse!!
El Cid at 9:00PM, Dec. 14, 2017
I wonder what kind of birthing rituals the cliff people practice? Heated stones and incense, maybe?
KimLuster at 4:47AM, Dec. 15, 2017
I tried to think of a pun involving birth and cliffs... I got nuthin' :D
jerrie at 7:58AM, Dec. 14, 2017
I also plead guilty to not talking to siblings who live close
KimLuster at 8:28AM, Dec. 14, 2017
We awful!!
Jason Moon at 7:47AM, Dec. 14, 2017
Thats the thing about living in the wild forests, it takes a hike to visit your friends XD
KimLuster at 8:28AM, Dec. 14, 2017
The Denizens of Crators Edge should know...!
bravo1102 at 5:04AM, Dec. 14, 2017
All the new vocabulary was presented in perfect context. Very clear and well done. As for not contacting siblings who live close, I plead guilty.
KimLuster at 7:45AM, Dec. 14, 2017
Thanks Bravissimo! Yeah, I have a couple half brothers I haven't seen in decades - really shameful!!! As for the text, much appreciated - I will listen to any and all critique and advice you (and anyone) is willing to give...!! Although if it's harsh critique maybe a PQ LOL!!