Ch. 1 - Pg. 11
KimLuster on Dec. 29, 2017
If you haven't guessed by now, Rhiaan is different! Even in this very different world! How and why? Well, that's the story!
So, my son used to play an MMORPG, and he kept talking about an Item called a Lushroom! I like the name so kinda swiped it, although I put a hyphen in it, because I want the first syllable to represent something else (not lush)…!
Life and Good Dreams!
skyangel at 12:32AM, Jan. 17, 2018
Beautiful composition on the art and very dramatic too!
Peipei at 11:52PM, Jan. 1, 2018
More epic fight scenes! Nice work! :D
plymayer at 9:09PM, Jan. 1, 2018
Yep.
El Cid at 9:36AM, Dec. 31, 2017
Way too lenient, going just for the knee caps. I'd be collecting heads!
KimLuster at 6:15AM, Jan. 1, 2018
Probably, but as Jamie below mentioned, just maiming them on the mountainside, to starve, might be even more cruel!!
Tantz_Aerine at 9:34AM, Dec. 30, 2017
great imagery in this!
KimLuster at 2:53PM, Dec. 30, 2017
Thanks!
jerrie at 1:12AM, Dec. 30, 2017
awesome fight scene
KimLuster at 2:53PM, Dec. 30, 2017
Thanks!! :)
fallopiancrusader at 10:35AM, Dec. 29, 2017
I hope for the Banditis' sake that their Sembuls are capable of eventually healing those knee injuries... Or at least functioning as a prosthetic
KimLuster at 8:21PM, Dec. 29, 2017
Those things can do quite a bit! I'm thinking, at some point, of doing one of those sort of 'aside' pages, like Brave and CallMeTom do, sort of laying out all it can do (although I sorta did that already in my Godstrain Extras comic, where I was developing concepts)
usedbooks at 9:08AM, Dec. 29, 2017
I always wondered in video games and movies why all the henchmen, upon seeing a foe tear into one of their number, don't surrender/run. It seems like the stupidest level of pride and bravado (unless their boss is scarier).
KimLuster at 9:53AM, Dec. 29, 2017
True, but there's only three here, and this happened pretty fast, so maybe they haven't had time to register... although the boss's reaction next page might be interesting...!
Jason Moon at 7:33AM, Dec. 29, 2017
Great fight scene! She isn't going to ever walk the same
KimLuster at 9:07AM, Dec. 29, 2017
Thanks! Of course, maybe maybe healing works a bit different in this world! ;)
Jamie59 at 7:14AM, Dec. 29, 2017
If she just cripples them that will be much cruller than killing them,
KimLuster at 6:22PM, Dec. 29, 2017
Or... what if crippling just a few, leaving some to get them off the mountain, provided they behave and.. or... ha, just see next page!! :)
Jamie59 at 12:31PM, Dec. 29, 2017
That would be our world. This world in a remote location I would Imagen a slow painful death from starvation if they can't walk.
KimLuster at 9:06AM, Dec. 29, 2017
Well... I know some crippled people that would disagree! :)
bravo1102 at 6:12AM, Dec. 29, 2017
So the Godstrain still exists and some people can tap into the weave of reality better than others.
KimLuster at 8:18PM, Dec. 29, 2017
hehe I was being a little facetious! While you're an excellent plot direction guesser, I think there's gonna be a few surprises on what connections there might be to my previous story!
bravo1102 at 12:17PM, Dec. 29, 2017
You're only 11 pages in. Plenty of time to change stuff. You could even kill off the main character and have it really focus on her family. Never too late to shake things up.
KimLuster at 9:06AM, Dec. 29, 2017
Oh Noooooz... you guessed my entire plot! :D