Ch. 1 - Pg. 15
KimLuster on Jan. 10, 2018
Well… at least they all are quick to make up!
On we go!!
Finally, thanks so much everyone for the voting for the Godstrain in the DD Awards! I've really been at a loss for words, but I'm humbly grateful and deeply honored!!
Thanks so much, and Life and Good Dreams to all of you!!
skyangel at 12:53AM, Jan. 17, 2018
mhmmm....Bestial :)
Banes at 7:04PM, Jan. 11, 2018
*or similies
Banes at 7:04PM, Jan. 11, 2018
Sweet! Ah, I like the "smell my hair" approach! Intoxicating, like the twining strings of...the ropes from...hm. I'll leave the string metaphors to you!
KimLuster at 6:27AM, Jan. 12, 2018
LOL enough rope to hang ourselves right?
Jamie59 at 5:23PM, Jan. 10, 2018
Smell my hair what's next smack my butt. What ever happened to I Want to Hold Your Hand?
KimLuster at 9:05PM, Jan. 10, 2018
The Beatles died out Long, Long... long ago!!
El Cid at 4:40PM, Jan. 10, 2018
Ah, the old "smell my hair" move. Eases the tension every time! There's something bestial about these wild folk; they're not terribly inhibited at all.
KimLuster at 9:04PM, Jan. 10, 2018
Bestial eh? You're getting it! :D
Jason Moon at 1:00PM, Jan. 10, 2018
Emotional felt scene here, it's good to see they are all real close. You have such realism to your characters, I really enjoyed your drawings of Salem. Rhiaan is a wild one, I'm curious how old is she?
KimLuster at 9:04PM, Jan. 10, 2018
Thanks Jason! How old? Well... people in this world view time differently, there's a general attitude that you don't keep track of time, per se. You watch nature, the changing seasons, biological changes, and react accordingly... Why that is will be delved into further, but for now Rhiaan might be hard-pressed to say how old she is. She is of mating age, for certain...
tupapayon at 11:53AM, Jan. 10, 2018
A kick ass girl whose desire is just to get laid... I can relate...
KimLuster at 12:16PM, Jan. 10, 2018
Me too... and then... nine months later... O_O
usedbooks at 11:06AM, Jan. 10, 2018
Sounds like she practices with everyone's staffs.
KimLuster at 12:15PM, Jan. 10, 2018
LOL well it is a different world... different standards... but she doesn't go all the way - at least not yet!! ;)
plymayer at 9:12AM, Jan. 10, 2018
Your wins in the DD awards are well earned. Congratulations!
KimLuster at 10:17AM, Jan. 10, 2018
Thank You!
plymayer at 9:11AM, Jan. 10, 2018
Smelling her hair might be nice.
KimLuster at 10:17AM, Jan. 10, 2018
It's the conditioner!
bravo1102 at 5:51AM, Jan. 10, 2018
She has them so wrapped around her finger. And it's going to lead them to disaster. It always does.
KimLuster at 7:31AM, Jan. 10, 2018
Yeah, Rhiaan's character flaws are a bit different than the self-pitying character from a previous tale ;) I feel this is realistic under these circumstances but it does seem a struggle to keep her from being an un-likeable asshat (or, if so, for a reader to give her time to grow...) Ahhh the struggles of character creation!! :D