I got my doubts I'm enjoying the comic to much and this isn't much after a long break but at the same time I warned you guys if I take more then a few days off I wouldn't want to start back up. Not sure what to do I'm not bored with the comic just tired of putting it together.
To avoid any confusion there reason everything is dark is I for the life of me couldn't figure out how to sprite everything plus I'd have to come up with newe poses for everyone to much work so that's why it's half assed I'm sorry guys but like it says it's a test to get used to spriting again.
(He's still with you guys, here, I'll repost what I said.)
Guardian: *Only half awake* Need... Blood...
*They can see my fangs grew larger*
(Yeah, if I lose too much blood, there's a small chance my vampire side takes over so I can get more blood, this doesn't happens often though.)
No, it means if we ever meet face to face, I'm going to beat you with oranges.
If your going to kill a character, make it dignified, not just a sick emotional play for the Sadists to wank to.
Rage: Yea... *smiles* Sooner than I think. you did more in a day than I have in a few years...
0: *after a few hours has hit them all serval times in a row* Pwhh.
Tayes: *smiles and sits down*
Ulthor: *I smile* Yes love, lets get to work, lets save my friends, other wives and kids.
(Perhaps saying other wives wasn't so smart, but thats up to you Kaede.)
*Meanwhile*
S.U.: That time might be closer then you think.
*S.U. points at a breach in the sand, the entire beach has been moved from the rest of the island for a few inches, meanwhile*
One: Better, but ssstill not perfect, try again.
*New orbs come and float around them, this continues for several hours*
(I'm just glad to see a new page.)
Guardian: *Only half awake* Need... Blood...
*They can see my fangs grew larger*
(Yeah, if I lose too much blood, there's a small chance my vampire side takes over so I can get more blood, this doesn't happens often though.)
*Meanwhile*
S.U.: Rest well, you earned it.
*Meanwhile*
One: Continue.
*The orbs start to float around them again*
oh well I wasn't trying to be a sadist I was trying to improve something I'm not very good at which is true death and not I'll be back before you know it bullshit. She is my favorite character and one I'm very proud off. I needed the practice the fact that I got you so upset means I did my job.
First off, I have books now also.
Secondly, In Code Geass, Princess Euphemia was the sweetest, most kind hearted and genuinly innocent character in the series. Despite being brought up in a pampered life style, she would not sit idly by as the Japanese were oppressed by her people, and did everythign she could to help, despite this garnering the ire of her sister, and the hatred of her (jack ass) father. She even made friends with several of the comoner cast...
Then for no reason, she is accidentally hypnotized by her well intentioned best friend (later revealed to also be her brother) into mass murdering the Japanese civilians with no care for their humanity, only brought to an end when her brother is forced to shoot her, which breaks the mind control, leaving her last few moments in the arms of ehr love interest, innocently asking if the Japanese people are safe (as she did not remember what happend while under mind control) while slowly dieing, and leaving the Japanese as second class citizens once again.
THAT IS NOT GOOD STORY TELLING! THAT IS WHAT SADISTS THINK IS ENTERTAINING!
Well I didn't want to be cliced by saying she didn't really die or some bull crap like that and a the woman's cult was the messed up middle area. Back then plots were just ideas of trying to make a random comic have more of a plot line it was hard work going from an a lose story joke a day format to what is now. Also why Anthony heals like will be explained soon as I bring him back. This is insightful and I don't watch code gess so I have no idea what your talking about. The Renamon thing I do need to aplojize for she comes from my book series I know her well you guys however don't. As for what Tina and Titan are that was only a recent idea as well. And Titan's role as guardian is very well explained in the orginal comic I quite clearly explained he was the guardian of the barrier when it broke it was his job to get it repaired and fixed once the comic ended he was one of Anthony's friends nothing more or less you could say he is a lost boy but not an offcial one. Tina is his biological twin sister as well in the "real world." And they are first capalons Eve created making the first living Capalons.
Do I have to revisit this?
Ok, for one, you give no explanation. Right from the start, Titans role in the story is very vague, we don't even know what he is till recently, and most of the plot line I know was explaned in the RP, nor the comic. After that, you fell into several nasty habits, including wanton, rapid fire character introduction, followed by said characters being left out in the cold while you introduced more new characters. the plot lines appeared solid, and I would have let them alone, but then came the real bad parts.
You seemed to just get board with a plot half way through, and leave it unfinished without telling us. This led to confusion over what Coryns characters were doing in your comic, what AAGGRESSS was doing, we only recently met up with the Renamon look-a-like, Tira and Titan I would have completely forgotten had you not mentioned them just a few pages ago. We only saw a fragment of Greedy Grabber(whom I gave you full permission as a gift, I might add), Max was a bit more understandable cos I appear a lot more in the RP. Blaze got the worst of it, she jumps around plot lines with changing personalitys like there are clones or something.
I want to stab Blood...and also your depiction of his character makes me want to stab his character.
Anthony suffers from a very bad case of "Jimmy Olson Syndrome" In which he will be in a cripling situation, and fine just a page later with little to no explanation.
You did not depict the women cults deaths grapfically enough. For ticking me off, they should have had the fleash pealed from their faces, then boiling tar poured down their backs, their fingers cut off, their legs broken with hammers, and finally left to be eaten alive by fire ants. And all the while forced to watch the Captain America movie.
And finally, Eves death. Just Eves death. Congradulations on making a huge duche out of yourself. Your no better than the writers of Code Geass for Princess Euphemias death. There are a lot of sick things I have seen, but the capacity of a human to invision the sweetest, most innocent character dieing a slow, agonizing death as ehr body fails around ehr, crippled by fear and crying that the last words to her brother were not words she ment before dieing alone and forgotten like a rag doll cast aside just scares me in ways that shouldn't exist. I said a lot that day, but I think I could have said more with the 3 words I thought I would never say. That's not funny!
check your PQs.
Also, Might I suggest creating a seperate, condenced version fo the comic, using only the cannon pages from after the dream world shattered, and calling it The Lost Boys Redux. Or something to that effect, so the story is easier to follow? for new readers.
Dreamweaver at 1:43PM, Feb. 25, 2010
Anthony: *Squeezes a blood pouch into his mouth* There you go captain.
ulthor at 12:36PM, Feb. 25, 2010
(He's still with you guys, here, I'll repost what I said.) Guardian: *Only half awake* Need... Blood... *They can see my fangs grew larger* (Yeah, if I lose too much blood, there's a small chance my vampire side takes over so I can get more blood, this doesn't happens often though.)
Dreamweaver at 12:32PM, Feb. 25, 2010
I don't know where he is
ulthor at 11:52AM, Feb. 25, 2010
(Could someone react to Guardian?)
Dreamweaver at 11:00AM, Feb. 25, 2010
fine I'll try to keep it in mind gods no wonder why my teacher said my writing style wasn't ready for the real world.
Warbeast at 10:59AM, Feb. 25, 2010
No, it means if we ever meet face to face, I'm going to beat you with oranges. If your going to kill a character, make it dignified, not just a sick emotional play for the Sadists to wank to.
ulthor at 10:51AM, Feb. 25, 2010
(Don't feel too well today, so I'll wait for a few others to respond before replying myself.)
Rage Nakasa at 10:31AM, Feb. 25, 2010
Rage: Yea... *smiles* Sooner than I think. you did more in a day than I have in a few years... 0: *after a few hours has hit them all serval times in a row* Pwhh. Tayes: *smiles and sits down*
ulthor at 10:16AM, Feb. 25, 2010
Ulthor: *I smile* Yes love, lets get to work, lets save my friends, other wives and kids. (Perhaps saying other wives wasn't so smart, but thats up to you Kaede.) *Meanwhile* S.U.: That time might be closer then you think. *S.U. points at a breach in the sand, the entire beach has been moved from the rest of the island for a few inches, meanwhile* One: Better, but ssstill not perfect, try again. *New orbs come and float around them, this continues for several hours*
Rage Nakasa at 10:00AM, Feb. 25, 2010
0: *fires at them, at lest gettin half this time* Canick: *curls up in Rages arms* Rage: *smiles* He will one day supass me.
Kaede Higuchi at 9:39AM, Feb. 25, 2010
Kana: *takes his hands, eyes sparkling* Let's get to work!
ulthor at 7:06AM, Feb. 25, 2010
(I'm just glad to see a new page.) Guardian: *Only half awake* Need... Blood... *They can see my fangs grew larger* (Yeah, if I lose too much blood, there's a small chance my vampire side takes over so I can get more blood, this doesn't happens often though.) *Meanwhile* S.U.: Rest well, you earned it. *Meanwhile* One: Continue. *The orbs start to float around them again*
Dreamweaver at 11:35PM, Feb. 24, 2010
oh well I wasn't trying to be a sadist I was trying to improve something I'm not very good at which is true death and not I'll be back before you know it bullshit. She is my favorite character and one I'm very proud off. I needed the practice the fact that I got you so upset means I did my job.
Warbeast at 11:26PM, Feb. 24, 2010
First off, I have books now also. Secondly, In Code Geass, Princess Euphemia was the sweetest, most kind hearted and genuinly innocent character in the series. Despite being brought up in a pampered life style, she would not sit idly by as the Japanese were oppressed by her people, and did everythign she could to help, despite this garnering the ire of her sister, and the hatred of her (jack ass) father. She even made friends with several of the comoner cast... Then for no reason, she is accidentally hypnotized by her well intentioned best friend (later revealed to also be her brother) into mass murdering the Japanese civilians with no care for their humanity, only brought to an end when her brother is forced to shoot her, which breaks the mind control, leaving her last few moments in the arms of ehr love interest, innocently asking if the Japanese people are safe (as she did not remember what happend while under mind control) while slowly dieing, and leaving the Japanese as second class citizens once again. THAT IS NOT GOOD STORY TELLING! THAT IS WHAT SADISTS THINK IS ENTERTAINING!
Dreamweaver at 11:15PM, Feb. 24, 2010
Well I didn't want to be cliced by saying she didn't really die or some bull crap like that and a the woman's cult was the messed up middle area. Back then plots were just ideas of trying to make a random comic have more of a plot line it was hard work going from an a lose story joke a day format to what is now. Also why Anthony heals like will be explained soon as I bring him back. This is insightful and I don't watch code gess so I have no idea what your talking about. The Renamon thing I do need to aplojize for she comes from my book series I know her well you guys however don't. As for what Tina and Titan are that was only a recent idea as well. And Titan's role as guardian is very well explained in the orginal comic I quite clearly explained he was the guardian of the barrier when it broke it was his job to get it repaired and fixed once the comic ended he was one of Anthony's friends nothing more or less you could say he is a lost boy but not an offcial one. Tina is his biological twin sister as well in the "real world." And they are first capalons Eve created making the first living Capalons.
Warbeast at 11:03PM, Feb. 24, 2010
Do I have to revisit this? Ok, for one, you give no explanation. Right from the start, Titans role in the story is very vague, we don't even know what he is till recently, and most of the plot line I know was explaned in the RP, nor the comic. After that, you fell into several nasty habits, including wanton, rapid fire character introduction, followed by said characters being left out in the cold while you introduced more new characters. the plot lines appeared solid, and I would have let them alone, but then came the real bad parts. You seemed to just get board with a plot half way through, and leave it unfinished without telling us. This led to confusion over what Coryns characters were doing in your comic, what AAGGRESSS was doing, we only recently met up with the Renamon look-a-like, Tira and Titan I would have completely forgotten had you not mentioned them just a few pages ago. We only saw a fragment of Greedy Grabber(whom I gave you full permission as a gift, I might add), Max was a bit more understandable cos I appear a lot more in the RP. Blaze got the worst of it, she jumps around plot lines with changing personalitys like there are clones or something. I want to stab Blood...and also your depiction of his character makes me want to stab his character. Anthony suffers from a very bad case of "Jimmy Olson Syndrome" In which he will be in a cripling situation, and fine just a page later with little to no explanation. You did not depict the women cults deaths grapfically enough. For ticking me off, they should have had the fleash pealed from their faces, then boiling tar poured down their backs, their fingers cut off, their legs broken with hammers, and finally left to be eaten alive by fire ants. And all the while forced to watch the Captain America movie. And finally, Eves death. Just Eves death. Congradulations on making a huge duche out of yourself. Your no better than the writers of Code Geass for Princess Euphemias death. There are a lot of sick things I have seen, but the capacity of a human to invision the sweetest, most innocent character dieing a slow, agonizing death as ehr body fails around ehr, crippled by fear and crying that the last words to her brother were not words she ment before dieing alone and forgotten like a rag doll cast aside just scares me in ways that shouldn't exist. I said a lot that day, but I think I could have said more with the 3 words I thought I would never say. That's not funny!
Dreamweaver at 10:46PM, Feb. 24, 2010
knowing what my plot holes are would be a big step then I could at least explain why they were left that way.
Warbeast at 10:40PM, Feb. 24, 2010
That's a lot to get rid of. Want me to salvage your past storylines and fix up the canyon sized plot holes?
Dreamweaver at 10:38PM, Feb. 24, 2010
possibly. Though in all honestly I may just restart the whole thing get rid of the mistakes I made in the past.
Warbeast at 10:32PM, Feb. 24, 2010
check your PQs. Also, Might I suggest creating a seperate, condenced version fo the comic, using only the cannon pages from after the dream world shattered, and calling it The Lost Boys Redux. Or something to that effect, so the story is easier to follow? for new readers.
Dreamweaver at 10:26PM, Feb. 24, 2010
by fate he means he had a feeling it was going to happen not that it was going to happen for sure this is my comic we're talking about.
Warbeast at 10:24PM, Feb. 24, 2010
Did someone say "Fate"? (holding a cricket bat with nails run through it)
Rage Nakasa at 10:03PM, Feb. 24, 2010
[Glad you are tryin]