And of course, life has it so that I ate my threadbare buffer due to prepping for a pretty intrusive surgical procedure in my lower jaw (fun, I know), so if you're my patron you will see the next page (I've already started it) earlier, as I'll be making it over this weekend.
Scottish accent works! I still am getting used to remembering to write in Etan's accent right. Per the surgery I'm okay! Going in for stage two next week.
Well, Etan was about to give praises (aka pray) to his goddess at sunrise but he won't do it now that he feels upset but will try again at noon :) As for the rest, remember how Aviya exploded about seeing Despotate guys kill her mom?
Ironscarf at 7:35PM, June 12, 2024
Hope you're feeling much better. Have we had 'shouldna' before? I'm now reading all of the dialogue with a Scottish accent, dinnae ye ken?
Tantz_Aerine at 12:54PM, June 13, 2024
Scottish accent works! I still am getting used to remembering to write in Etan's accent right. Per the surgery I'm okay! Going in for stage two next week.
The doodler at 4:14PM, June 3, 2024
This is some QUALITY exposition without infodumping!
Tantz_Aerine at 11:37PM, June 3, 2024
Thank you!! I'm trying!
Banes at 1:49PM, May 31, 2024
Oy - I hope you're feeling alright (if the surgery already happened). And this page has me pondering if we can ogle and worry at the same time...
Tantz_Aerine at 11:37PM, June 3, 2024
The first stage is complete! I'm feeling okay I just have 0 levels of creativity right now XD Fighting it though.
marcorossi at 7:00AM, May 31, 2024
The Despotate should control its subjects better, that is weird given its name.
Tantz_Aerine at 8:32AM, May 31, 2024
Hah, we'll get to that soon >:D
Othosmops at 5:03AM, May 31, 2024
Either I wasn't paying attention, or the protagonists are talking about things that will only become clear to us readers later.
Tantz_Aerine at 8:32AM, May 31, 2024
Well, Etan was about to give praises (aka pray) to his goddess at sunrise but he won't do it now that he feels upset but will try again at noon :) As for the rest, remember how Aviya exploded about seeing Despotate guys kill her mom?
usedbooks at 4:54AM, May 31, 2024
Dental surgery is awful. Feel better! Interesting dialogue on this page, some subtle world building exposition is always helpful.:)
Tantz_Aerine at 8:31AM, May 31, 2024
Thank you! And I hope so, glad you noticed that!
bravo1102 at 4:23AM, May 31, 2024
Feel better. Any kind of surgery just takes it all out of you.
Tantz_Aerine at 8:30AM, May 31, 2024
Thank you!