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Indybot on Oct. 6, 2009
I tell you what, if you ever want a lesson in humility, then all you have to do is start a comic using unfinished art from two years prior. Seriously, if I had even tried to fix everything I didn’t like about this page, specifically the first two panels, then it would have been far later than a measly several hours. JEEPERS.
In panel four, we see an example of me starting to hurt for some extra panels (remember, the two longer pages were added in later). I wanted to establish that getting stuck in alternate dimensions is generally more inconvenient than anything else, but since I was limiting it to four panels, we just get a bit of rushed dialogue crammed into the bottom-right corner of the page.
Link for the Fox Hunt! Book will have to come later.
Indybot at 7:08PM, Oct. 8, 2009
Thanks, you guys. ^ ^ And Tedmund, I agree wholeheartedly. Future comics should be inked. If I get good enough, I'd even like to start coloring them someday, but inking is the more immediate goal.
Mangopieland at 9:42AM, Oct. 8, 2009
love panel 1
Tedmund at 9:36PM, Oct. 7, 2009
woah, your a good artist. Could use some inking though.