To enter, leave a suggestion for the witty dialog for the above sketch in your comments, or PQ me if you wish. I will choose the best one (IMO) and post the winner's entry with a finished page on Wednesday. AND, check back Friday to see the winner's prize!!!
Dantheman: you know you're ineligible since you won last time, but go ahead and post a suggestion if you wish!
I tried to keep this one in line with the current story of our alien friend's city escapades… see what you can do with an elevator scene!
thanks and have fun!
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UPDATE: if you haven't already, go check out the fabulous fan art from Amy of Antcomics! It's in my little “fan art” section (starting 9/25) ;0)
Hell, yeah!!! I'll give it a shot, even if probably not very brilliant... ;-)
F: We're going home, my friend! Just sit down, relax and enjoy the flight!
Z: I'm not sure we're in the right space ship...
I love that everyone still calls Chris "cincy" even tho his avatar and name has changed. You made your mark around here, man! You'll always be "cincy" to me, aww. And thanks for the congrats on the Tribe, I'm psyched! 2 playoff teams in a row. Now, about those %$#@ Browns....
oh,...I'm a straight chick and I'm distracted by that avatar. 0.0
Hee hee...You guys always make my contest winner decision tough! arg!
Ooh I got another one for Zorphbert!
Fred: Look Zorphie! Buttons!
Zorphbert: Fred! *sigh* I've got a feeling that probe sanitation will look like a vacation after this.
Fred: Look Zorphie! All the buttons turn red when you push them!
Zorphbert: Fred I've got a feeling that's not the only thing that's about to turn red.
Hmm, or Zorphbert could go "Hell Yeah!" you know and break character this one time. Just have him throw up some devil horns as he shouts it.
And Cincy's avatar is very distracting.
First things first: Congrats to your Cleveland Indians for winning the Division Crown. They might just pull off a World Series win.
And now my entry:
Fred: Hey, Zorphie! Look at all these buttons that I get to push!
Zorphbert: As if pushing my buttons weren't enough.
And why not.... Hell yeah!
thanks jurbas and heymelby! Great suggestions!
oh, and I already started the finalized artwork, and the guy's face/head is indeed shown (just not so in the sketch). But a valid point there heymelby ;0)
panel 1, Ok Z, I've pressed every floor's corisponding button, now we're sure not to miss our owners floor, which ever it is.
panel 2, Once again F your mastery of the obvious has landed us in deep doggie do do.
Note: on panel 2, re arrange the art so that guys face isn't covered, psychologically people look at faces and an obstrcted face makes people un easy and will make them focus on "wo is that" rather than your talented page.
Balloon 1 - "See? the one that says '18' is ALSO red!! HA! Now look, I push thi..."
Balloon 2- *WOOF* Um, pay no attention *WOOF* to the *WOOF* talking dogs!... *WOOF*!!"
Fred: This makes the ride last longer. Everyone likes longer rides.
Zorphbert: Something tells me this is not the same as the other rides.
All that said... Ersatz's coment is better than mine.
Fred: There, we'll find our master's floor if it kills us.
Zorphbert: I don't think that's what'll kill us, Fred.
Sorry, similar to Gibbo's, but then I was going to make a fart joke but Jurbas got there first! Boooo!
dracco at 1:34PM, Sept. 25, 2007
Hell, yeah!!! I'll give it a shot, even if probably not very brilliant... ;-) F: We're going home, my friend! Just sit down, relax and enjoy the flight! Z: I'm not sure we're in the right space ship...
madscott at 1:18PM, Sept. 25, 2007
F: Now that I have started all systems we should reach escape velocity Z: We'll be lucky to escape this elevator.
SpANG at 1:13PM, Sept. 25, 2007
F: I can't seem to get this vending machine to give me food. Z: Sigh. We're in an elevator, idiot.
dgriff13 at 7:55AM, Sept. 25, 2007
I love that everyone still calls Chris "cincy" even tho his avatar and name has changed. You made your mark around here, man! You'll always be "cincy" to me, aww. And thanks for the congrats on the Tribe, I'm psyched! 2 playoff teams in a row. Now, about those %$#@ Browns.... oh,...I'm a straight chick and I'm distracted by that avatar. 0.0 Hee hee...You guys always make my contest winner decision tough! arg!
Villamar at 7:17AM, Sept. 25, 2007
Ooh I got another one for Zorphbert! Fred: Look Zorphie! Buttons! Zorphbert: Fred! *sigh* I've got a feeling that probe sanitation will look like a vacation after this.
reconjsh at 7:16AM, Sept. 25, 2007
FRED: "Finally, something I can do well. Initiating LAUNCH SEQUENCE Captain!" Zorph: "Ummm... Would ya'll believe 'Bark, bark'?"
Villamar at 7:07AM, Sept. 25, 2007
Fred: Look Zorphie! All the buttons turn red when you push them! Zorphbert: Fred I've got a feeling that's not the only thing that's about to turn red. Hmm, or Zorphbert could go "Hell Yeah!" you know and break character this one time. Just have him throw up some devil horns as he shouts it. And Cincy's avatar is very distracting.
Crispiest Fortune at 9:32PM, Sept. 24, 2007
First things first: Congrats to your Cleveland Indians for winning the Division Crown. They might just pull off a World Series win. And now my entry: Fred: Hey, Zorphie! Look at all these buttons that I get to push! Zorphbert: As if pushing my buttons weren't enough. And why not.... Hell yeah!
dgriff13 at 8:38PM, Sept. 24, 2007
thanks jurbas and heymelby! Great suggestions! oh, and I already started the finalized artwork, and the guy's face/head is indeed shown (just not so in the sketch). But a valid point there heymelby ;0)
heymelby at 8:32PM, Sept. 24, 2007
panel 1, Ok Z, I've pressed every floor's corisponding button, now we're sure not to miss our owners floor, which ever it is. panel 2, Once again F your mastery of the obvious has landed us in deep doggie do do. Note: on panel 2, re arrange the art so that guys face isn't covered, psychologically people look at faces and an obstrcted face makes people un easy and will make them focus on "wo is that" rather than your talented page.
jurbas at 6:17PM, Sept. 24, 2007
also HELL YEAH!
jurbas at 6:17PM, Sept. 24, 2007
1st bubble: WOOOO FREE RIDE!! 2nd bubble: very inconspicuos aren't you?
dgriff13 at 5:44PM, Sept. 24, 2007
lots of goodies! thanks 2ndwnd, tweebus, toonman & stewWriter! For those of you still thinkin', ya got another whole day!
tweebus at 3:15PM, Sept. 24, 2007
Fred: I'm starved too! One of these buttons has to be room service... Zorphbert: Maybe it's better we jus grab some take out!
man in black at 1:18PM, Sept. 24, 2007
hell yeah
antcomics at 12:37PM, Sept. 24, 2007
I got nuttin. It's so cool to see rough drafts though...for some reason.
StewWriter at 10:04AM, Sept. 24, 2007
Balloon 1 - "See? the one that says '18' is ALSO red!! HA! Now look, I push thi..." Balloon 2- *WOOF* Um, pay no attention *WOOF* to the *WOOF* talking dogs!... *WOOF*!!"
ToonmanAZ at 9:52AM, Sept. 24, 2007
Fred: For some reason I'm glad I use 'Dial' Zorphbert: For some reason, I wished everyone did!
2ndwnd at 8:43AM, Sept. 24, 2007
Fred: This makes the ride last longer. Everyone likes longer rides. Zorphbert: Something tells me this is not the same as the other rides. All that said... Ersatz's coment is better than mine.
dgriff13 at 8:34AM, Sept. 24, 2007
cool stuff, guys! Keep 'em coming! Feel free to make multiple entries, I don't care! It's always quality over quantity when I'm choosing, anyway, ha.
JZintel at 7:12AM, Sept. 24, 2007
Fred: Hey look it's just like that "Die Hard" movie we saw the other night. Zorphbert: "Yippee ki yay mother F****er"
Villamar at 6:37AM, Sept. 24, 2007
I like the drawing, but I got nothing, still to early in the morning. I hate mornings
madscott at 6:17AM, Sept. 24, 2007
really nice!
Ersatz at 3:16AM, Sept. 24, 2007
Oh, almost forgot...... HELL YEAH!!!
Ersatz at 3:15AM, Sept. 24, 2007
Fred: There, we'll find our master's floor if it kills us. Zorphbert: I don't think that's what'll kill us, Fred. Sorry, similar to Gibbo's, but then I was going to make a fart joke but Jurbas got there first! Boooo!