I think there's way too much going on in this one, too many half-punchlines. I guess I wasn't happy with just one. My hope is that between the over-abundance of jokes and Fred's Foam Finger, you'll find something you like. Plus, it's fun to say “Fred's Foam Finger”. Go ‘head, try it. Even better if you have cookie dough ice cream in your mouth. Okay, bizarre rambling over.
I don’t actually have cookie dough ice cream. This makes me sad.
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Midge: LOL, actually, I have been blessed with lack of PMS (my BF is a very lucky dude). But if I'm holding a grudge, all it does take is some ice cream and I'm good. :0D
slimred & harryq: you guys are askin' for it, just like horque said ;0)
MBz0rz: you always find my typos. I did mean "for a bit", looks like I have an extra space in there- the "A" probably got deleted. dang it! will fix.
NYJ: LOL, hope your keyboard isn't ruined! Would have a been funny to hear that.
angel: thanks! Interesting way to look at it...
pinkerton: damn that Aunt Flo! She can be such a biach.
reconjsh: ah well.. not one of my best. I always feel the need to add more and more, that just one dinky joke won't be satisfactory. bah.
antcomics: LOL, frantic about describes it. I don't need to be PMSing to crave cookie dough ice cream tho!
dantheman: money? where? You're sending me money? ;0)
I'm PMSing too so can he get me some cookie dough ice cream too while he's at it?
I don't think it's too busy at all. It's sorta frantic...like...PMS! Haha
I agree - there's a bit too much going on here. You do tend to have too much text. I'd always try to do everything with words or sound effects... and then use text/SFX only if necessary.
Second panel, Zorphbert says "he'll grovel bit" I think you mean "a bit" or "for a bit?". :x
And I agree, I think there is a little too much going on in this strip. Maybe take out Fred's "She's number one!" and the cookie dough ice cream comment at the end? Just a suggestion. =)
dgriff13 at 7:30PM, May 26, 2008
Midge: LOL, actually, I have been blessed with lack of PMS (my BF is a very lucky dude). But if I'm holding a grudge, all it does take is some ice cream and I'm good. :0D
TheMidge28 at 6:03PM, May 26, 2008
dang dawn! you sure hold a grudge! :)
dgriff13 at 2:25PM, May 23, 2008
slimred & harryq: you guys are askin' for it, just like horque said ;0) MBz0rz: you always find my typos. I did mean "for a bit", looks like I have an extra space in there- the "A" probably got deleted. dang it! will fix. NYJ: LOL, hope your keyboard isn't ruined! Would have a been funny to hear that. angel: thanks! Interesting way to look at it... pinkerton: damn that Aunt Flo! She can be such a biach. reconjsh: ah well.. not one of my best. I always feel the need to add more and more, that just one dinky joke won't be satisfactory. bah. antcomics: LOL, frantic about describes it. I don't need to be PMSing to crave cookie dough ice cream tho! dantheman: money? where? You're sending me money? ;0)
dantheman at 1:59PM, May 23, 2008
I love half punchlines. It's like getting more for my money...
antcomics at 9:57AM, May 23, 2008
I'm PMSing too so can he get me some cookie dough ice cream too while he's at it? I don't think it's too busy at all. It's sorta frantic...like...PMS! Haha
reconjsh at 8:35AM, May 23, 2008
I agree - there's a bit too much going on here. You do tend to have too much text. I'd always try to do everything with words or sound effects... and then use text/SFX only if necessary.
pinkertonpark at 7:10AM, May 23, 2008
I have a feeling it will resolve itself when Aunt Flo leaves town. Alwaaaays does.
alpha_beta_angel at 7:10AM, May 23, 2008
I like the fact there are so many jokes in this one. It brings more light to the fight and makes them all seem goofier than usual
n_y_japlander at 7:04AM, May 23, 2008
*note to all... Don't say "Fred's Foam Finger" with water in your mouth.... I hope they can resolve this spat quickly!!
Mbz0rz at 5:45AM, May 23, 2008
Second panel, Zorphbert says "he'll grovel bit" I think you mean "a bit" or "for a bit?". :x And I agree, I think there is a little too much going on in this strip. Maybe take out Fred's "She's number one!" and the cookie dough ice cream comment at the end? Just a suggestion. =)
horque at 5:12AM, May 23, 2008
The people leaving comments seem to be unconcerned for their safety.
harryq at 4:01AM, May 23, 2008
I was once run over by a menstrual cycle! It hurts!
slimredninja at 11:50PM, May 22, 2008
This must be a period piece