dgriff13 at 5:23PM, June 24, 2008

THANK YOU to everyone who gave it a shot! I think this was one of my harder ones to write.

johnkeating at 12:12PM, June 24, 2008

Ack, I'm trying...but I got nothin'!!!!

jgib99 at 10:53AM, June 24, 2008

Okay. My first try at this. Here it goes. Weird Kid: Okay guys. These are hot dogs. People love to eat them at ball games. Weird Kid: Oh wow! The ball's coming this way! I can show off my mad athletic skills!! BONK! Zorphbert: Mad athletic skills, eh? It looks like Fred has everyone here beat.

alpha_beta_angel at 10:26AM, June 24, 2008

Hope I'm not too late to try my hand at this. panel 1: Don't worry about Wally, he gives out hotdogs..See? they aren't dangerous. panel 2: forget what I said...incoming!! panel 3: great now you've turned this baseball game into a circus.

SpANG at 9:56AM, June 24, 2008

Weird Kid: Here ya go guys! I gotcha some ball park franks! CRACK! Weird Kid: Wow! What a hit! Wait... It looks like it's COMING THIS WAY! BONK! Zorphbert: Ugff! If only they used weiners instead of baseballs. You could play teh outfield! ... Oh, wait. I am EXCLUDED. ... Well anyone that likes that one, just tweak it to be your own. ;)

carrollhach at 9:22AM, June 24, 2008

I like seeing how you work, Dawn. really nice motion and shape happening. You get better and better ;)

n_y_japlander at 8:14AM, June 24, 2008

Dawn, I know I have not been around much.... I'm working on my anniversary thank you movies every free moment I have... As far as your contest... I'm so sorry I'm drawing a blank.. but I know between a few of these guys, you got a hard choice!

ghostrunner at 11:11PM, June 23, 2008

and heres your weiners guys! look up on the screen, what a hit, i hope someones gonna catch that let it go fred, your no retriever

Crispiest Fortune at 9:56PM, June 23, 2008

Here's what my entry would have been if Z&F wasn't "rated E": W.K.: Here ya guys go... a real ballpark favorite... Hot Dogs! W.K.: Yipes! That ball is coming straight for us! Protect your wieners!!! Z: Somehow I don't think that's what he was talking about, Fred.

Crispiest Fortune at 9:20PM, June 23, 2008

W.K.: And here's your hot dogs... hope it's nobody you know. W.K. : Dude... why is that ball getting bigger? Z: I guess it finally hit him.

ghostrunner at 9:17PM, June 23, 2008

cant think of anything either

dgriff13 at 8:52PM, June 23, 2008

it's cool guys.. you have one more day to conjure up something brilliant!

slimredninja at 8:42PM, June 23, 2008

hmmm I'll have to think on this one

TheMidge28 at 8:33PM, June 23, 2008

I'm sorry Dawn everything I come up with is phallic oriented.

dgriff13 at 5:28PM, June 23, 2008

croxtonhas: thanks, come back Wednesday to see the final piece- written by one of you lucky duckers! Toonman: nice! Thanks for playing, man!

ToonmanAZ at 4:30PM, June 23, 2008

Weird Kid: Here guys, have a hot dog... no actual dog is in them... I think. Weird Kid: Wow! That ball is coming this way! Maybe I should catc- BONK! Zorphbert: Fred, no actual dogs are in those, there's no relation!

croxtonhas at 3:09PM, June 23, 2008

Love the penciling,stylish!

dgriff13 at 12:58PM, June 23, 2008

Let's go duckers! I wonder if I'm making these too hard to come up with punchline somehow. It's tricky... you have to give a set-up, something interesting to go on, but not spoon-feed a punchline idea. Sorry guys :0(

harryq at 11:41AM, June 23, 2008

Brain froze...permanently. But you already suspected as much.

man in black at 8:39AM, June 23, 2008

ahh brain freeze, can't think