Discussion of the comic.
What do you think?
Zeph
at 12:32AM, April 9, 2010
Comic The Mutha Flippin God of Airsoft
Rockin the WTF face.
CLEARLY AN OUTRAGE! CLEARLY!
wait what?
Rockin the WTF face.
CLEARLY AN OUTRAGE! CLEARLY!
wait what?
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greenraven
at 7:53AM, April 9, 2010
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TheFlyingGreenMonkey
at 11:35PM, April 10, 2010
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Ryuthehedgewolf
at 8:34AM, April 17, 2010
I love it, because it's a super-stylized manga, but it's fun to read through. Most manga seem like they have this…cookie-cutter style (no offense to manga artists out there), but I like this. Keep up the great work.
Although, I wish some of the pages had a more finished look to them, because sometimes it's hard to follow what's going on. So if you made more fluid lineart instead of sketchy, I think it'd fix that problem.
Although, I wish some of the pages had a more finished look to them, because sometimes it's hard to follow what's going on. So if you made more fluid lineart instead of sketchy, I think it'd fix that problem.
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RedCast15
at 3:00PM, May 11, 2010
Comic rules on of my favs and i'm tryin to get my buddy into it. I love how you use pencil drawing and that you do multiple updates in pencil instead of rare ones in color. Seriously it doesn't make much a difference i'd rather have multiple (of course up to you).
Chuckwagon
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Salsa
at 9:26AM, June 8, 2010
One of the funnier comics I've read. I like the style and the writing.
RAGE!
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LordHacked
at 4:14AM, June 25, 2010
I like it, I love how it's grey since I like comics in the grey-scale and you just have some colours now and then like the paint in it, I really love that and it's an interesting game they're in >:'3 I'd like to try that ^^ …except the almost die thing ^^'
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DMXPure
at 6:44PM, June 27, 2010
I love your comic.
Pros
* Interesting and unique idea.
* Andrew is very interesting, and a complex character emotionally, while not being boring or cliché.
* You flesh out characters from other works easily, giving a new perspective to them while not being completely wrong about them.
* Your art style is energetic and exciting, while not being too cute or too gritty.
Cons
* It's not colored, or properly inked. Some panels look very sloppy.
* There's too much filler, just to buy time between pages.
* Your other OC's like the gun shop owner and Zoey are flat and two dimensional, and take up spots that could have been filled with other anime and game characters. It detracts from the magic of the world the comic takes place in.
* Max is downright annoying. He's a cliché character who serves no purpose in the story. It feels like he was shoehorned in, when your favorite game character could have taken the spot.
Overall, I would give your comic 4 out of 5. It's interesting, exciting, and Andrew is very entertaining. The art style avoids being generic, and makes up for its occasional lack of quality or polish. And most of your characters are varied and interesting, and so far have drawn from a small variety of sources. I will definitely favorite it.
Cheers.
Pure
Pros
* Interesting and unique idea.
* Andrew is very interesting, and a complex character emotionally, while not being boring or cliché.
* You flesh out characters from other works easily, giving a new perspective to them while not being completely wrong about them.
* Your art style is energetic and exciting, while not being too cute or too gritty.
Cons
* It's not colored, or properly inked. Some panels look very sloppy.
* There's too much filler, just to buy time between pages.
* Your other OC's like the gun shop owner and Zoey are flat and two dimensional, and take up spots that could have been filled with other anime and game characters. It detracts from the magic of the world the comic takes place in.
* Max is downright annoying. He's a cliché character who serves no purpose in the story. It feels like he was shoehorned in, when your favorite game character could have taken the spot.
Overall, I would give your comic 4 out of 5. It's interesting, exciting, and Andrew is very entertaining. The art style avoids being generic, and makes up for its occasional lack of quality or polish. And most of your characters are varied and interesting, and so far have drawn from a small variety of sources. I will definitely favorite it.
Cheers.
Pure
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Immortal
at 4:51PM, Sept. 23, 2010
I enjoy this comic because of the unique style you portray the cannon characters from anime, and how they would interact in a pretty much ‘normal’ setting as PB takes place in.
I also enjoy the whole you make the action flow. For the most part, it's pretty easy to follow and figure out what is happening in those sequences.
….. On an odd note, this whole series reminds me of the Color War episode of American Dad, more so since the paint knife XDD
I also enjoy the whole you make the action flow. For the most part, it's pretty easy to follow and figure out what is happening in those sequences.
….. On an odd note, this whole series reminds me of the Color War episode of American Dad, more so since the paint knife XDD
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