Hi,I am scribbloid,hobbyist comic creator and I did a short webcomic. I desperately seek feedback because I want to redraw/remake this short story but didn`t get enough feedback to make a good plan for the new version.
My webcomic “journey through the starsea” is a short Scifi-Fantasy-Survival-Story.It is a quick read!

Someday in the future I will release an edited version of this comic with story-,layout- and art-changes.
With the art and I am quite certain what I want to do differently next time but I am unsure about the story, perhaps you can focus your critique on the storytelling/ story, dialogue and characters?
But art-critique is appreciated as well!
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Love that cover!!