Prologue p12
PeterAaronRose on March 7, 2007
This page starts with the aftermath of the carnage. Again, intentionally obscured to make the page accessible to both the more sensitive as well as the more hardened reader. The detail's there if you want it. I like the effect myself, since it allows you, as the reader, to fill in whatever blanks you want in your own mind's eye, which is where the story really plays out in the end.
The dicotemy of the seasoned warrior archetype against that of redemptive innocence is a theme that I find myself drawn to in my writing. Dark anti-hero's who have no hope for their own personal salvation, but still have one last spark of optimism to look towards the future beyond themselves for redemption. I guess that probably says something about me, but I digress.
Akuma the Spectre at 9:12PM, March 25, 2007
Ooops that didn't come out right! Sorry. The correct response: OOOhh! Cool demon slayers! Get em! Darn thing doesn't have an edit button.
Akuma the Spectre at 9:09PM, March 25, 2007
Ohhhhhhh!!!!! Coool! Kill demon slayers nice!
jaklaw at 4:28PM, March 21, 2007
ahhhhh sweet sweet revenge its a dish best served painful (to the other person I mean) =)