takoyama at 12:40PM, April 23, 2024

you are a leo like me

incognito-mystery-person at 11:44PM, Nov. 23, 2006

Oooh. The eyes in the third panel are so pretty.... But the pages are very busy. I suppose the only thing I can suggest is shading the background a bit.

Frail at 3:52PM, Aug. 22, 2006

The only thing I am slightly bothered about is how busy the pages are. Maybe that's because I'm used to simplicity? Huh. I don't know. ^___^