Chapter 7.18.212
LanceDanger on Feb. 19, 2008
*JUST IN CASE* I updated yesterday an actual page =3
I'm kinda feeling a bit more comfortable with the action scenes again. That is, in fights, anyway, since I haven't had a straight-up fight scene since Warlord vs Funnybone in chapter 4 (chapter 5 was like a team vs monster thing, and chapter 6 was mostly swords chopping limbs off XD). I hope you're all liking the action thus far =)
This chapter is nearing it's end, then, chapter 8-11 will be the final chapters of book 1, which is very exciting for me =3 Book 2 has more action than this current book, because I really wanted to pace this opening book to really, really introduce the mayor characters and main plot first, but pretty much everything goes Book 2 onwards =3 Anywho, thank you all for reading, and please look foward to the next update =D
Used Books: Lol who knows what goes on in the minds of those people XD; Popenfresh: Lol, yeah, she can have her moments 0_0; Peipei: Lol, yes, I think “twisted” would describe her well, I think she would actually describe herself as such XD; Magickmaker: Lol, actually, @##$ing nuts would describe her well, as well XD; Kyupol: Lol, well, she is clowing around a bit on that page XD
worstcase at 6:52PM, Feb. 20, 2008
The last panel is breathtaking
kyupol at 2:07PM, Feb. 20, 2008
crit: the action is a bit hard to understand.
Janen at 12:06PM, Feb. 20, 2008
I went through the pages I missed and I have to say its amazing how much your art has progressed in just a couple of days. This is some awesome action.
popenfresh at 10:14AM, Feb. 20, 2008
Ha he sooooo deserved that one. :p
magickmaker at 11:09PM, Feb. 19, 2008
I think you're getting better at action sequences. This looks good. Villains' gotta stop doing the Bond thing, though.
Peipei at 10:54PM, Feb. 19, 2008
Silence is gold xD Talkativeness never gets the bad guys anywhere :3
usedbooks at 10:25PM, Feb. 19, 2008
Nice action. Silly villain must have been watching too much TV. Trying to carry on dialogue during a fight. Lol. Nice yellow eyes, btw. (Lots of anime demon people have yellow eyes.)