Postscript commentary
bravo1102 on April 27, 2014
Vashod is doing her best to keep her lab coat closed with her injured arm while Calloway is being an exhibitionist. I have edited the page to put bandages over their chests but that page is on another computer so maybe I'll post it tomorrow as an alternate.
The ending mentioned was the ending of the comic as originally written. I changed it to tighten up the shooting schedule by dropping three extra sets and a couple of cameos. Also I felt it was a cheap shot. Literally as it would have ended with Norwood blowing away blood beast-Calloway.
jerrie at 10:41AM, April 29, 2014
I like that the captain survived, and didn't become one of those monsters. good to have a happy ending! And I loved seeing that blue witch getting De-capped!
El Cid at 7:46PM, April 28, 2014
Honestly, I would have liked any of the endings. Gory and schlocky nihilism or blue skies happy ending, it's all good. A fantastic grindhouse space horror experience overall, and I'd love to see more bloodbeast mayhem in the future.
Banes at 9:53AM, April 28, 2014
Loved it! I think the ending you chose worked really well. Maybe in a video or animated version, the "final shock" scene would have worked? But it's been done so many times; I'd have still liked the end you went with. Bravo once again, bravo! Looking forward to the next one!
fallopiancrusader at 6:46AM, April 28, 2014
What a great story! I like this ending the best. I hope you have the resources and energy to do more stories in the future, because it would be fun to see more. Yea, more Fy-Zorla- oids! She was a hottie! And maybe some topless Norwood beefcake shots too...
plymayer at 5:31AM, April 28, 2014
Outstanding! Can hardly wait for the next one.
KimLuster at 4:23AM, April 28, 2014
Yeah, this is a satisfying ending. Seeing more Fy-zorla-types will be cool. Great job on this story!