CoyoteLongshot at 10:57PM, March 1, 2008

Ooh. Gruesome. You've got great perspective. I know I told you that already, but really, it's great. :)

Hdub7 at 12:43AM, Nov. 16, 2007

I like this page, however, I think it could be a bit stronger. Maybe have the mail panel the 1st one, to really get an impact with her, and work everything around that. Maybe have the 3rd panel the 2nd largest. I hope that made sense. I really love the art and the story so far.