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KimLuster on July 1, 2014
Kimber Lee's doing pretty well… I'm impressed haha
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Note: middle panels go from right to left - hope the arrows helped with that.
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Went to Atlanta again yesterday - hope mega-travelling is over soon
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Thanks for reading everone :)
skyangel at 12:39PM, Feb. 3, 2015
Those shooting poses are awesome!
KimLuster at 4:12AM, July 9, 2014
Well, I would have put up my latest page already - but no one would be able to see it ;)
KimLuster at 4:44AM, July 4, 2014
@Peipei: haha yeah I like to think these soldiers are really good, really professional - but Kimber Lee is just that much better! :)
Peipei at 11:42PM, July 3, 2014
These guys are pathetic in contrast to Kimber. They can't even get a grip on a single person, of course, she is one extraordinary single person. :p
KimLuster at 4:35PM, July 3, 2014
@plymayer: Thanks!; @bravo: thanks, and I'll heed your advice in future pages; @Banes: Yeah, we can't have proper Sci-fi without pretending like we understand quantum mechanics ;) - and I'm trying to convey that Kimber Lee perception of time is so vast now that she can actually think and ponder while flipping and fighting. Lot easier in movies it seems :)
Banes at 3:22PM, July 3, 2014
Yes...yes, precisely! I... was just about to mention Finkleman diagrams myself! You gotta feel for those Grunts who get shot in the leg - but Kim's just trying to survive. I like the peek into her thoughts and character during this battle. Bonus points for shooting at a helicopter - an awesome action staple!
bravo1102 at 3:06PM, July 3, 2014
Exciting. Well visualized but the sound effects look like errant squiggles on the page. I couldn't figure out what they were at first. Either increase their visibility or dispense with them? Usually just a big POW for the gunfire is enough and readers will put the rest of the sound effects in themselves. Kind of like a movie where there's no sound in the action sequence except the character's voice over. They're so into what they're doing noise doesn't exist. In the zone.
plymayer at 4:31AM, July 3, 2014
Very exciting!
KimLuster at 7:35PM, July 2, 2014
@FC: Thank You! :) Interesting that you mention Feynman diagrams, as this story has referenced Quantum Mechanics a few times (and will even more later on, but in sci-fi ways). Tail rotors - now why didn't she think of that earlier? :) Really though, I think Kimber Lee hopes she can get by with incapacitating them via injury instead of killing. She's getting in deep enough trouble as it is
fallopiancrusader at 6:27PM, July 2, 2014
Wooo that's one intense action page! Nicely done! With so much chaos going on, the order in which the panels are read doesn't even change the narrative. It's like a comic book version of a Feynman diagram. Take out the tail rotors, Kimber! that'll take those choppers out of the fight right quick.