Mo' talkin'! Mo' whinin' and cryin'! Mo' jerkin' and bitchin'! :D . Just a few more pages till we start the part I've wanted to do in, like, fo'evah'!! . Thanks for Reading Everyone!
@Paul: haha yeah she shoulda... As for as giving her time... Well... I think under better circumstances they might give her more time, but there's an indestructible behemoth with bad intentions out there...! And honestly, there's meta-plot involved...! If, in story, they gave her more time, then you readers would just see her sitting around doing more talking and moping during that 'more time'!
That last panel sounds ominous and I have a feeling Kim's no longer going to have the time or option to argue about facing Eli on her own one final time. *bites nails*
You created this mess, you fix it. Why are you still around? Because someone went out and saved our ass and now you won't repay the favor because you got finger-fucked. Yes, you are in pain, yes it sucks but you're the only one who can do this lady. And have I told you this is all kinds of intense and awesome writing? Wordy and whiney? Maybe but intense and full of emotion and really character driven kind of action stuff. Wow.
She should have heeded that sign in the staff kitchen, the one saying "Clean up your own mess" when she first entered these facilities. ;) Still, it's quite a lot to ask for, especially since they do not seem to plan on giving her any more time to think on it.
KimLuster at 5:31AM, Jan. 24, 2016
@Paul: I often look in the mirror to get an idea on those expressions - I make a good Sad Face! :)
KimLuster at 5:30AM, Jan. 24, 2016
@Paul: haha yeah she shoulda... As for as giving her time... Well... I think under better circumstances they might give her more time, but there's an indestructible behemoth with bad intentions out there...! And honestly, there's meta-plot involved...! If, in story, they gave her more time, then you readers would just see her sitting around doing more talking and moping during that 'more time'!
skyangel at 10:41AM, Jan. 23, 2016
That last panel sounds ominous and I have a feeling Kim's no longer going to have the time or option to argue about facing Eli on her own one final time. *bites nails*
bravo1102 at 9:57AM, Jan. 23, 2016
You created this mess, you fix it. Why are you still around? Because someone went out and saved our ass and now you won't repay the favor because you got finger-fucked. Yes, you are in pain, yes it sucks but you're the only one who can do this lady. And have I told you this is all kinds of intense and awesome writing? Wordy and whiney? Maybe but intense and full of emotion and really character driven kind of action stuff. Wow.
tupapayon at 8:19AM, Jan. 23, 2016
"No time to cry, only time to die"... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVDqEsbc828
PaulEberhardt at 5:29AM, Jan. 23, 2016
Btw. these troubled expressions of hers are ace!
PaulEberhardt at 5:26AM, Jan. 23, 2016
She should have heeded that sign in the staff kitchen, the one saying "Clean up your own mess" when she first entered these facilities. ;) Still, it's quite a lot to ask for, especially since they do not seem to plan on giving her any more time to think on it.