Prologue - Pg 13 (Temporary)
Freux on April 27, 2007
This is just ugly linework and will be toned and such appropriately.. later today. I'm not up to it tonight, sorry. n__x;
Freux on April 27, 2007
This is just ugly linework and will be toned and such appropriately.. later today. I'm not up to it tonight, sorry. n__x;
Jabali at 1:46PM, April 23, 2008
love it anyway.
Free write at 4:52PM, March 27, 2008
ahh bird guts this time!
Fitz at 10:56AM, July 19, 2007
Great job on the eyes in the first panel, very expressive.
Malachite Maenad at 10:17PM, May 1, 2007
Your art is beautiful!
Kristen Gudsnuk at 11:53PM, April 30, 2007
btw I don't think the linework is ugly, quite on the contrary, I love it!! however, in the fourth panel I think maybe you should make him look a little more frightened... there seems to be less emotion on his face there than in other frames.. sorry..!! I think it looks great though, and you don't even have to change that!!! *hugs page* great job!
Kristen Gudsnuk at 11:51PM, April 30, 2007
*cries* the crows!!! ;_; stupid farmers!!
Niona at 7:05PM, April 30, 2007
i thought it was all good cep box one.. o.o
oneminutecomics at 2:26PM, April 30, 2007
yeah, I remember this. Been so long since I saw this. Still has some of the best lineart on the Duck. I#m happy to see you're updating as slowly as me :D
jonmkl at 1:07PM, April 30, 2007
wow this is really interesting, I'm definitely gonna follow this one.
Azaeziel at 9:06AM, April 30, 2007
Your line art looks great. Poor crows, but that is what farmers do sometimes. The sad truth of life...
Annhialator at 11:28PM, April 29, 2007
I really like your compositions ..although is it just me or am I seeing brain parts on the 5th panel?...might probably be me
Darwin at 6:43PM, April 29, 2007
I was gonna say...I love the linework but I really like the toned pages!
reconjsh at 3:57PM, April 29, 2007
sweet page boss.
Locoma at 1:12PM, April 29, 2007
I wouln't call that an ugly linework :-D can't wait to read more, the story is getting very interesting
Thirdperiodlunch at 12:25PM, April 29, 2007
Eeep!
Allan at 11:40AM, April 29, 2007
Oh man, that is so sad!
Willowanderer at 8:35AM, April 29, 2007
I like seeing your linework. it makes life diffrent and neat.
LanceDanger at 8:48PM, April 28, 2007
Ouch! Poor crows :(
PinkBunny at 6:20PM, April 28, 2007
NO!!! BIRDIES!! *sobs hysterically* At least the main one hasn't died.
Persephone at 3:13PM, April 28, 2007
Poor Crows... I really do hate people sometimes, so very heartless.
theorah at 2:04PM, April 28, 2007
Very nice perspective in the firsrt panel,. it really emphasizes the emotion perfectly :)
JillyFoo at 1:22PM, April 28, 2007
Noooooooooooooooooos!
emjee at 12:11PM, April 28, 2007
...I can see his brain!
Laeluu at 11:29AM, April 28, 2007
D:< KILL ZE' FARMER.
Razzy Jazz at 10:54AM, April 28, 2007
aww...