Margery: A new start 3/6
Genejoke on March 9, 2012
This chapter proved hard to write, there are so many things I wanted to get in yet fitting them in was impossible. One version had a different scene for each page but it felt too choppy, other aspects have been removed to the next Margo chapter.
jerrie at 1:30AM, March 11, 2012
5
Banes at 10:00AM, March 10, 2012
love the look on Margery's face in the last panel
Jamie59 at 5:25PM, March 9, 2012
5
chrisdotclark at 1:30PM, March 9, 2012
Loving this... five stars.
Ozmandious at 6:44AM, March 9, 2012
Shoot the lawyers! Wait, wrong setting. Never mind.
El Cid at 5:03AM, March 9, 2012
Those pesky Antini again!
plymayer at 3:39AM, March 9, 2012
6
bravo1102 at 2:38AM, March 9, 2012
It worked. You have good instincts.