Harriet:Rundown 5/6
Genejoke on April 4, 2012
There may be a page tomorrow as I have nearly finished it already. These pages aren't that interesting visually and are fairly easy, where as the next chapter will be a little more challenging.
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Bravo, that may be fair to say.
El cid… well perhaps…
Banes, how do you now it isn't just bad writing? eh there is a reason but I didn't expect anyone to pick up on it yet.
Ozymandious, uhmmm….
Jamie59, well there is actually a large crew to the ship but as the story is focused on stowaways we haven't seen many of them. I probably should have shown that better in hindsight.
Jamie59 at 8:10PM, April 4, 2012
Way to torture her.
plymayer at 10:10AM, April 4, 2012
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Ozmandious at 7:54AM, April 4, 2012
ooh, I hope that thing is immune to a 300lb polo mallet! Mama's not going to be happy!
gullas at 7:45AM, April 4, 2012
what a trooper...
Banes at 6:30AM, April 4, 2012
....and it crossed my mind that it was a writing mistake, hahaha, ...but I didn't notice that with any other characters so it stood out.
Banes at 6:29AM, April 4, 2012
Horrific!
houseofmuses at 5:15AM, April 4, 2012
Very interesting plot development.
houseofmuses at 5:12AM, April 4, 2012
Aw, this is bad....this is really, really bad.... D:>
El Cid at 4:51AM, April 4, 2012
No way! Don't believe him, he's messing with your head!
bravo1102 at 2:38AM, April 4, 2012
Eliminate can mean so many things, never lose hope Harriet. I think the guy who programmed this thing was a student of the Third Reich.
jerrie at 1:32AM, April 4, 2012
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