1.1.0. Part One: Consequences, Chapter One: Merle's Fate

Frail on Dec. 19, 2007

Convenient scene change! Aaaaand we've reached the first chapter. ^^ Yay! Finally. Now we get to go on to the rest of the group. Lili's been pushed back until later, ‘cause I changed everything to start with Enny and Ritzy instead. ^^;;; I change… too much…

… some of you especially observant people might’ve noticed that this picture has not been inked. Those with exceptionally good memories might remember that I mentioned that I was almost *done* inking the chapter page. This would be correct? What happened? Well, I just… decided to change everything again last minute. Literally. I was sitting there, inking the grass and thinking to myself: “I don't like how this looks. My sketches always look better fore'n they're inked.” And so I decided–*very* last second, in fact it was right before I went to bed last night–to just… draw a picture of Merle in a more realistic style. I didn't ink it and it's still a bit sketchy and weird, but it looks tons better than the other picture.

… for the record, Merle never actually wears Nobility's little cape-and-brooch-thing. It was bugging me and I have an OCD so I had to mention it. I will be *so* quiet now. I promise.

Commentage!

LanceDanger: 1. Awwww. Thanks man. ^^ *huggles Funnybone plush*
2. You always are so nice, Alvaro. *hugs* XD And you know me and my fangirliness too weeeeell. ^^ Thank you for the cookiiiies~! *gives Waffle cookies in return*
3. XD! Thank you, Alvaro. And I'm sure Omega thanks you too. XD That made me laugh out loud, man.

polo: ^^ Thank you.

Faithie: 1. ^^ I diiid, I diiiid. ^^;; Even though I haven't gotten too far in yet. But I *still* read some! ^^ And it was good.
2. ^^ Yep yep yep.

Inlad: 1. As I'm now sure that you know, that's Trey and not Ritzy. ^^
2. Iiiii dunno. He's quiet. S'like… the opposite of Ritter. So's I have a feeling you prolly won't like him much.
3. That gets revealed later, my friend. ^^;; Though it's really… not that dramatic a thing. ^^;; M'sorry…

Meg Overhill: 1. ^^ Ee! Yesh I aaaam. *hugs* Speaking of, I owe you a Garret fanart. Don't let me forget.
2. ^^ Uh-oh spaghetti-os! … ^^;; Sorry. I can't resist the temptation. I will be *so* quiet now. ^^ *hugs*

Mutation: 1. Do you? ^^ I'm glad to see I'm not alone. I always like making notes. It helps… justify the not so great drawings. I'll like be: “Hmm… that looks bad. *scribbles ‘Poorly drawn *arrow towards drawing*’*”
2. ^^ Mhm. I like feathers. ^^;; Can't… draw them really well, though. That's like… Freux's job. Or it is. From now on.

PaniK: 1. ^^ Ee! *hugs* Thankies. M'glad.
2. XD Yesss. Only I'm not as awesome as you are at fight-stuffs, so I'm just having a very convenient scene-change. ^^;;; I have no sense of drama…

… I will eventually get to that other commentage!. But not now… *shifty eyes*