Chapter 5.11.144
LanceDanger on Sept. 9, 2007
*NOTE: This page is a couple hours late because of trouble uploading the durn thing!* What the-!? An update? Monday? After nearly a month an actual, honest to God update on a Monday again!? Well, kiss my grits, it's true! XD Lol, hopefully, this means things will be on track once again, we'll see. Here, we see more of Jane's mom (a character that MANY people despise). We also get hints and bits and pieces of the past that is yet to be revealed about the main characters! =0 Just what did Fred's dad do? In chapter 1, Fred's parent where in a pretty heated argument… We all know that Cheryl got that black eye last chapter by Fatfish's bodyguard, but why is all such a big secret and Jane is obviously covering for her? And the million dollar question at the seems, why IS Jane with Charles, someone who clearly doesn't deserve someone as good-hearted as Jane is? The plot thickens, and nothing really is quite as you might expect….
Lol, bet nobody saw that last update coming, to be as steamy as it was, huh? Lol, like I mentioned in chapter 2 I think it was, I had to change the title to a rated “M” title, for a couple of reasons. One being the pretty violent and dark chapter that chapter 3 was (some people are STILL reeling from the decapitation scene with Funnybone lol). And the last update would be reason #2 XD Anywho, hope you all enjoyed todays update, please look foward to the next page, and thanks for stopping by, there ain't nothing but love for all of you! =3
Slimredninja: They certainly steamed up the place a bit lol XD; Krensada: Thanks,it was a hectic, but good weekend, hope you had a good one. Cool avatar, btw!; Magickmaker: Lol woo-woo! Hmm, I dunno, usually, when one very good thing happens in such stories, some VERY bad things are just around the corner….
Peipei at 12:31AM, Sept. 13, 2007
can't believe i missed this page :O im curious to know what happened next :3 hehe
shaneronzio at 6:38AM, Sept. 12, 2007
The way she sprung back with Security and Stability, sounds like she is speaking from wisdom gained by experience.
slimredninja at 10:34AM, Sept. 10, 2007
great page nice work on the dialog it flows real smooth.
kingofsnake at 10:01AM, Sept. 10, 2007
rut roh