Chapter one: Page three
Genejoke on Oct. 18, 2013
One of the hardest parts of doing an ensemble cast is letting the reader know about the characters. i was tempted to have more info on the page about who is who, instead Idecided to tease it out over the coming pages.
plymayer at 9:42PM, Jan. 19, 2014
There are a million stories in the naked village.
El Cid at 6:14PM, Oct. 21, 2013
Btw: Lots of typo gremlins popping up.
El Cid at 6:14PM, Oct. 21, 2013
Part of the fun with these genre pieces is all of the ancillary stuff: Character profiles and maps and worldbuilding type stuff. It'll be interesting to see if you can get the same bang for your buck without it. But then, that's what Game of Thrones did, and that's been one helluva show so far (note to self: order DVD box set on Amazon)
bravo1102 at 2:31PM, Oct. 18, 2013
Nah, do what all fantasies do and walls of text explaining everyone's story down to their favorite childhood toy.