Snatch:page forty-two
Genejoke on May 5, 2014
The end is very much in sight. I'mm already ll into planning next story, although I have two very different versions at present. The end of this story has had several rewrites, something I will go over while posting guest art between chapters.
When I started Lore it was to start my creative drive again, it succeeded. The hardest part is making a convincing looking fantasy setting, in some places I succeeded, in others… not. Some of the action hasn't been as clear cut as it should have been and i think some characters probably needed a little more development, but I hope it has been more rough than smooth. But we ain't done yet.
The aim for story two is to be shorter, more concise and more character driven. maybe I'll pull it off right.
bravo1102 at 10:40AM, May 8, 2014
Dunno, to me the characterization is seeping through in bits and pieces. The focus here wasn't the characters and it didn't need to be.
El Cid at 12:14PM, May 7, 2014
It hasn't been perfect, but it has been exciting, and visually maybe some of your best work to date imo.
plymayer at 9:02PM, May 5, 2014
Good characters develop over time.
plymayer at 9:01PM, May 5, 2014
Stay on the mission - ALWAYs a good idea. Letting her go could come back to haunt them though.