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json on Sept. 29, 2008
so…..aparently my electrical “terminator” time-travel-bubble didn't quite come out right. but with no explanation, Jer is back and now he is a mutha f***ing CYBORG!!
we are also introduced to a fourth character (YES, Chia is a character), Haysoose. Jeff's “yes” man and side kick. the updated version of him is WAY f***ing doofy-er looking than the original design. and while it looks out of place and crude, that shit makes me chuckle like a little boy, so i'm keeping it.
Mushroomcomix at 1:48PM, Oct. 4, 2008
The time bubble is awesome, and I like the random introduction of Haysoose with just a simple YEAH!
Jason of Powerjeff at 9:02PM, Oct. 2, 2008
Looks awesome. The time bubble's a nice touch. The introduction to Haysoose kinduv comes out of nowhere and without context even more so than the original, but who cares?: this is Powerjeff. I like the super-cartoony, doofy Haysoose much better, though I recall that he looks drastically different in issue 3... Hmm... I have an idea. I'll message you about it.
drunkenpaladin at 3:42PM, Oct. 1, 2008
Hell. Is this STILL the freaking last page? More!
drunkenpaladin at 3:37PM, Oct. 1, 2008
I didn't get the time bubble at first. It's drawn fine, though. I'd love to see you color a certain part or two every so many pages for emphasis.