Book 4 Page 12
EmeraldCity on June 2, 2008
Ai and Mike are finishing up their date a little early it seems but things are looking pretty good for the young couple. This conversation pages are fun to write. I spend hours talking to myself in front of the PC sometimes to get a scene right.
Darwin at 5:47PM, Oct. 12, 2008
Hmmm...what's Mike got going on there? A lil' somethin' somethin' he's hiding?? The "Ability" line seemed to have hit him pretty hard!
EmeraldCity at 4:44PM, June 3, 2008
hahah I blew it on the date. oh well. Better early than never... oh wait. Man I need to relearn English again. Thanks for all the comments! These were fun pages to write. I love showing our characters' personalities in scenes like this. We have a lot of wacky stuff going in this series but it is great to have characters trying to have "normal" lives in the middle of it all.
trevoramueller at 1:53PM, June 3, 2008
Good dialogue here.
n_y_japlander at 8:37AM, June 3, 2008
(OO) but today is Tuesday!!!! Again love the detail!!! And the "bikuri!!!" I too do a lot of talking to myself.... but not for the same reasons!!! Great page!!
DAJB at 1:02AM, June 3, 2008
It can be fun playing cops and robbers. The uniforms, the handcuffs ...! ;-)