I appreciate this sort of stuff, It has this weird feel to it. I like the concepts. The introduction narrative with your avatar in the previous page works well, although I find parts of the text in need of revision. But, still, it is enough comprehensive for most â I think.
I like that thing with a rod, or staff at the 6th picture. It spots a unique innocence in the midst of all malicious creatures and demons! I wonder who it is! Is it just a random guy or will it be a character later in as the story progresses further? Interesting to pay notice to, is that it is painted more faded then the rest, with more light to contrast the dark. What is the âGreat Oneâ thinking about in this one?
To be continued, I believe!
I like the way you use the speech â bubbles, the reader can easily identify whose voice it is.
That warpgate/vortex thing coming up in the last picture looks nice.
I bet âThe Great Oneâ surely knows how too instill control in those minions of his!
I like the demons, they are cute! XP
And now moving on to the next installmentâ¦
General Balrog at 1:36AM, Aug. 22, 2009
I appreciate this sort of stuff, It has this weird feel to it. I like the concepts. The introduction narrative with your avatar in the previous page works well, although I find parts of the text in need of revision. But, still, it is enough comprehensive for most â I think. I like that thing with a rod, or staff at the 6th picture. It spots a unique innocence in the midst of all malicious creatures and demons! I wonder who it is! Is it just a random guy or will it be a character later in as the story progresses further? Interesting to pay notice to, is that it is painted more faded then the rest, with more light to contrast the dark. What is the âGreat Oneâ thinking about in this one? To be continued, I believe! I like the way you use the speech â bubbles, the reader can easily identify whose voice it is. That warpgate/vortex thing coming up in the last picture looks nice. I bet âThe Great Oneâ surely knows how too instill control in those minions of his! I like the demons, they are cute! XP And now moving on to the next installmentâ¦
amanda at 7:44AM, May 27, 2009
Beautiful effects here, and I love the demon speech bubbles. Awesome work!
El Cid at 7:25AM, May 27, 2009
The demon head honcho's pretty impressive. I wouldn't care to mess with him!