The Savior of Hell - The Propechy - Page 3
Vargorm on May 26, 2009
Sorry for being late, been out for a couple of days of larp (live-action-roleplay, for those who don't know about it) and by running around in the forest as a potionmaker doesn't include having a computer nearby. Plus I got sick right after it (what a luck I managed still to drive six hours back home. Urk!) so I haven't had the strengh to update. Hopefully I get back to the normal rutine and get some more up.
General Balrog at 2:30AM, Aug. 22, 2009
Nice paw-shot on panel 4! On the 9th panel on this page, what happened to the sky/landscape above the talking hag and lady? Should it be a blank spot there? Well it doesnât matter. I like the transition from that altered/twilight world to this natural daylight lit forest. But I would like to see a little more of the surroundings of the temple, I like landscapes. But maybe it was on purpose, leaving more room for imagination I guess, or; having it answered later in! Then again, I love details, but I believe that you did not care much for drawing a forest and some blocks! And thats fully understandable consider the production-rate, then again - who would not want to aim on drawing the things they like most first, or atleast aiming at getting to the funny parts as quickly as possible? Different tastes should also be taken into consideration. I myself, love details, but recognizing the need to heed the deadlines can be fairly annoying. So, to do the best of the situation is what counts, right?. I must really salute you for being so productive, the overall quality is really within my taste, I like it a lot! :P, and still I have not yet advanced to the latest pages of today, but If I keep up my phase I will get there! He looks cute in the last panel of the page! Such a nice teethy grin! âAnd donât forget to brush your maliciously beautiful teeth!â :P Good contrast to the innocent maiden on the last panel btw... Pushing further...
Vargorm at 10:17AM, May 27, 2009
Amanda - Oh yes, it would. XD I probebly would have been burned as a witch or something. haha. And I'm hearing with a friend of mine who would love to look over spelling/grammar for me. It isn't easy time to time. El Cid - All I can say: He does like his job waaaay too much. >< Some of my insperations was old myths, grew up mostly with dusty old mythology and folklore books.
amanda at 7:46AM, May 27, 2009
Ha, it would be awkward to run around in the woods with a computer regardless of your role XD This is a great start to the story, by the way. I do agree with El Cid that you might have someone check over your script for spelling/grammar before posting - however, your meaning is clear, so it's not a huge deal ^.^ Faved! I hope to see more and am looking forward to your story!
El Cid at 7:28AM, May 27, 2009
This guy enjoys his work a bit too much! This sort of smacks of Greek mythology, Zeus impregnating mortal women to give birth to demigods and stuff like that.