vgman

Rage Nakasa
Vgman:
sweet.

6 points for losing 8 men.

10 points for contiuing your story.

5 bouns points for realing you have no commander above you.

21 points total.

um you mean revealing?
That should have been obvios from my first post…

Also post 60!!

… points started over… you have 21.

Rage Nakasa

vgman

Rage Nakasa
Vgman:
sweet.

6 points for losing 8 men.

10 points for contiuing your story.

5 bouns points for realing you have no commander above you.

21 points total.

um you mean revealing?
That should have been obvios from my first post…

Also post 60!!

… points started over… you have 21.

I know… what dose that have to do with any thing?

… never mind. read that wrong.

After the plan had been worked out we separated into our groups. Tom, Let, and I all took point on the front entrance while Jens took the back. We crept to the entrance and on my count Let bust open the door as Tom and I rushed in… no one. We crept along the walls, five men on each side. The walls were cold hard metal. Like a blue velvet steel that kept ya awake when you were movin so slowly ya thought you might be dead. Finally we reached a corner. I headed the op so I check my corners. No one, not even a guard. I motioned for the men to move out and take point when Tom spoke up for the second time.

Tom “Maybe we should have some of the men stand guard, in case any one comes. They can radio us.”

The kid was right. I nodded in agreement and had two men take up each of the four point in the corridor. Then Tom, Let, and I moved in. We saw the General's office a few doors down. We knew that's where we needed to be. I led in and kicked that bitch open. The door flew wide as inside we saw a single man, in a single chair. He spun to us with a nod.

General: “I've been expecting you.”

My eyes widened and my thoughts ran wild. How did this guy… before I had the chance to finish my own goddamn thought Let and Tom rushed in to pat the guy down. I was so lost in my own thought I forgot procedure. Damn it Shin think next time!

After they secured him he began rambling. Makin no sense, far as I could tell. “No you have this all wrong…” He would say.

Let: Oh so you're not a General of those Pizza faced fascists?
General: Well yes but…

He began as Tom hit him in the face with a blaster he had picked up earlier. The General went out cold.

Tom: Can't interrogate him here, gotta move him back.
Me: Good thinkin son. We'll leave the men here for back up and have them follow out in ten.

We all nodded in agreement as we dragged the unconscious general out the front door. We got him about halfway to our base before he woke up; Now was a good a time as any to begin.

Me: You tell us what we need to know and…
General: Where are your men?
Me: I'm the one askin the questions here!
General: Where are they.

I hit him once real good in the face. He bled a little. I felt disgusted to have his Pizza Sauce lovin blood on me but it felt good to hit him.

Let: We left ‘em all back at your base in case anyone decides to show up.
Me/Tom: LET!

We yelled in unison. He shouldn’t have said anything but he was just too damn excited and wanted to show the General that we outsmarted him.

General: You're men, are all going to die.

Apparently we hadn't. Just then…


To be continued…

I'm going to be gone for most of today… I rate them after I get back. (that might be tomorrow)

ShinGen:

10 points for supentes

10 points for captcering a gennel.

10 points for stealf.

30 points total.

So what are the current totals?

Imshard: 30

Shingen: 30

Vgman: 21

Riku: 21

Their worst fears had been confirmed. The Tacos were developing a new recipe. And it was close too. The Spoofs finally confirmed it. The evidence was clear now. The hidden farm of lettuce experiments, the machine shops of experimental meat grinders, the oddly selective raids on the tomato fields. It all came together with the capture of the prototype seasoning mixture. The recipe may already be complete.

And now the Bravos were being sent on yet another hazardous mission deep within Taco territory. To find the recipe and either capture it or destroy it.

Ever since that day on the frontier when they had seen Delta group slaughtered in the Pass they had wanted revenge. They had had it ten-fold. Now they were out for blood.

These thoughts passed quickly through the commander's head. He shook it clear as he once again observed an enemy base. Like so many Taco installations it attempted to make up for lack of fortification in terms of massive manpower. This time it looked like they had succeeded. Crust-wings had located the facility during a routine flyby. Originally it had been disguised as a small outpost guarding a rail yard, safe and deep within Taco dominion. The with the capture of critical research elements the Tacos had become alerted to the fact the Pizza was aware of its activities. So a flush of soldiers had been instated to the hidden lab to guard its success. But where exactly was the lab entrance?
The Tacos had been meticulous in their hiding of it. A masquerade they maintained even while they plainly stated the importance of the site. Sandbags were being laid out. Trenches and concrete walls would not be far behind. The tractors and cement mixers had already arrived. Three more guard towers had been erected today. They had to act soon or it would become impossible to break in.
“I think I found it” Garl said quietly from beside him. “where?” “the loading dock on the north edge. Its too separate from the other structures. That and things seem to go in without coming back out.” “good call”. Relief flooded him but was tinged with dread. They had a target but how to strike it? An all out attack would be fruitless. No less than two whole TacoDiero battalions were down there, with a heavy armor detachment and a counter -espionage unit. Not even the Bravos could win those odds. The target was too valuable and well shielded to call in an air strike. A full-out invasion was out. Sizable reinforcements could take weeks to battle their way through just to get here. Even so, during such an assault the lab would be scuppered by the researchers and guards. So it came down to stealth.
“DUCK!” They hit the dirt just in time to avoid the flash search. Clever bastards.The Tacos had taken to using high intensity lamps to blind and discover observers in the surroundings. This is going to be hard. So many guards, so many barriers how were they going to….. Then a plan occurred to him.

The laborer looked up from his work. Pedestrian traffic had been warned to stay back 50 yards from the fence at all times or be shot. Right now he was digging a hole in the street for an adjustable vehicle barrier. The town around the depot was suddenly uneasy with the flurry of new activity on the base. Was the war going so badly that these backwater targets needed to be guarded? What was so important about their little spot on the map? Soldiers were no longer permitted out and only official traffic was now allowed onto the base. The depot had always been busy, but now it positively swarmed. Heavy vehicles, strange equipment and materials in crates and boxes, building materials. Soon this was going to be one of the most heavily built and guarded facilities in the empire. Strange. The TacoDiero foreman noticed he had stopped and started forward to reprimand him. The Work whistle saved him but received a stern “I don't like you” anyway. He climbed out of the hole and carried his tools to the night locker. A stream of late shift workers moved past him. When he reached the workers barracks he noticed something odd. There were too many workers in the common area. Ones he didn't recognize. “whats going on here? you boys know this isn't your dorm! You trench diggers have your own barrack down the way” They looked at him noncommittally. “we don't anymore. We finished the east edge this afternoon so they were moving our tents to the other side. Some blockhead messed it up though. Then they loaded our tractors onto a train! The supervisor got so torn up ovar it that he done put us here in frustration!”
Lazy bums the laborer thought to himself. All they do is sit on a blamed backhoe all day and let a machine do their work. “fine but the bunks are ours and keep your mitts off our stuff” “fine wit us, we's just headed out anyways, north side should be done with their shift for the night and their lettin us use their rides”
“good riddance” he muttered after them as they wandered out.

That was close Bas thought to himself as the meandered out of the worker's quarters.
It was dark now. Work was constant around the base so one more group of contractors went unnoticed as they cut their way to the north side loading dock. They had quietly replaced the unit of trenchers two days ago. They had been admitted with no extra scrutiny once they handed over the stolen work papers. They had been working honestly since then. They gave no sign that they were agents of Pizza. Finally they had an opening. The north side trenchers cycled out today and then were to take over their work. An easy shift passed and they were well rested for the mission.
The whistle sounded and they shut down everything normally. then proceeded to waltz off site like they hadn't a care in the world. once they were out of site of the foreman they coolly made a turn and walked straight through the side door of the dock. That was all it took. There were four guards, an auto-cannon, an elevator, and an oxygen pump. The high intensity flash grenade burned the cannons targeting optics and paralyzed the guards. The commandos turned workers rushed forward and made quick work of them before they could scream. Then they cut the air pump and waited. To prevent hack attempts the lab had no outside communication save for the com line to the guard shack they had just disabled. It didn't take long for the researchers and guards to come suffocating out. Enchiro the lead reseacher saw them. “By the soft shelled tortilla! that air pump wasn't scheduled to be replaced till the morning! what were you thi—…” he saw the dead guards “oh no” he moaned queitly. Bas and Garl shared a look of evil pride and replied “yup”.
Breath masks went on and down they went. At gunpoint the scientist was very willing to hand over his notes, complete his hourly security check-in with the base commander and purge his life's work from the lab. the pertinent info he handed over.
The dead guards were left and the bottom of the elevator shaft and the scientists were escorted out wearing workers uniforms. They all loaded onto an outbound train and an air bombing struck as soon as they were clear. a few miles into the middle of nowhere saw the train hijacked and driven straight to the Pizza Front.

Let me give you some of my backstory. War is all I have ever known. When I was 5, I was taken in by the army, after my parents abandoned me. The Tacodiers raised me to be a fighter. This next mission I undertook was not for my government. In fact, if they find out, I'll be arrested. This mission was my own.

The two governments were developing a new recipe. Tacopizza. It would end this war forever. The governments longed for peace. If peace did come about, I'd be fucked. I was going to sneak into the meeting hall, sneak into the room that had the recipe, and replace it with weapons plans. The others like me provided me with intel. The place was supposed to be lightly guarded. Intel isn't always right.

The place was so heavily guarded, it was going to be a bitch to sneak in. But that was good. I've been wanting a challenge. The intel stealing from the enemy base was way to easy. The only equipment I had was a tranquilizer gun capable of bringing down an elephant. This was going to be fun.

I got myself up onto the roof. That had to have been the easiest part. I went into the base and ran into some major resistance. Several Pizzateers spotted me. I pulled out my Tranq and shot each of them. In the battle, I got shot in the arm. I soon ran into some Tacodiers. They saw my insignia and thought I was one of the guards. They did ask me why I was bleeding. I saw my chance to stir up some trouble.

I told the Tacodiers that a squad of pizzateers just opened up on me. the only thing they said before they left to go after the pizzateers was “those bastards!”. I soon found the proper room. I snuck in and found the plans. I heard footsteps in the hall. I hid behind the door and tranqed the dude as he came in. Then I switched the plans. As I was escaping, I smiled as I heard the gunfire between the two sides as they fought over what I created.

When the plans were exchanged, the Taco leaders saw the weapons plans. Believing they had been betrayed, they declared there would be no chance for peace, ever!

Are we hunting or hunted? The chase had been long and hard.
A rogue Taco militant had sabotaged the peace talks.
The long efforts in discovering the new recipe and capturing the Taco scientists were for naught. Billions of peppers in had been spent to combine recipes and formulate the TacoPizza. Now it was all gone. The treaty was in shambles there was nothing left now but more war, and vengeance. The security analysis came too late. But at least it had given Command a target for us. Now the Bravos crashed wildly through the woods both chased and chasing. The Tacassassin and his contingent had fled into the neutral nation of Sausage.
No doubt they were bound for their allies to the east in Burger. Sausage defended its neutrality fiercely. Orders to avoid an international incident were promptly ignored when the Taco crossed the border. Now Sausagerwitzers were chasing both parties. They hadn't much time. Local forces were closing in. Bravo commander Cilantro was determined to catch the last Taco bastard before they were all apprehended. They had already killed the rest.

Suddenly his wish was granted. A dart whizzed out and buried itself into Doughy's chest. He promptly went down with a grunt. “SNIPER! DOWN!” DAMN IT! WE DON"T HAVE TIME FOR THIS! he thought bitterly. The sound of motors was plainly audible from all sides. No Time!. Basil! Garlic! you got anything?. Bas and Garl exchanged one of their grim little smiles before they said “Nope”. It was broad daylight, but there was no sign of their attacker. The tracks they had been following had ended suddenly. Oreg cried out as another dart tapped him on the shoulder. Double Damn! There had been no sound and no muzzle flash. The dart gun was air-powered then. The sound of their pursuers was getting louder. A new dart whizzed past him and buried itself into the wood by his ear. Just like that he sighted along its path and fired. Thats why I use bullets pansy He hit the retreating muzzle of the dart gun as i was retreating back into a bush. To his credit the man did not cry out as the weapon was blown apart and ripped from his hand. Like a well-oiled machine, 7 Blasters started to rip apart the area around his target. Suddenly there was nothing but stillness, and the noise of the Sausage troopers approaching very close by. Four of the troopers stood and closed cautiously on the spot. He erupted from the bush with knives, no machetes, and cut open one one of the Pizzateers. Sheer wit and years of battle-hardened reflexes saved the rest. In a way they expected this move because its what they would have done. Instantly they had their own blades out and were matching their skills to his. “screw that!” their yell came as simultaneously as their blaster fire. Bas and Garl didn't stop until they had emptied their magazines. Considering the power of the weapons there wasn't much left. Pity, he had wanted a prize to take home.
“Haltz!! Do nowt mowve!” Ah the Sausagers, just on time.
Without warning everybody then heard the clack of a grenade launcher's entire clip finish its flight timers. Commander Cilantro lost consciousness in a world of flame.

EDIT: NEED TO BE RANKED,…. TWICE!

Imshard's #1:

Great job as always.

10 points for the intense planning.

10 points for the capture.

10 bonus points for details!

60 total points.

Imshard's #2:
Wow…

9 points cause you lost a man.

10 points for the county names. (never would have thought of that.)

10 points for the battle.

5 bonus points for supence.

94 points total.

Riku's:
Now that was nice!

10 points for the back info.

9 points cause got hurt.

10 points cause you started the war again!

50 points total.

Yipee! points!

can't belaive I didn't get anything masterfully manipulating 3 all three storylines at the same time

10 bouns points for manipulating 3 all three storylines at the same time. 8D

Imshards points at 104

yay!…. wow I really wih somebody else would post….

Zero walked long and hard thought the desert. Every troop unit he came a crossed, where it was tacodiers or pizzateers, was destroyed by his hands. He was the number one enemy of both sides, and everyone was afraid of him. As he walked, he came to a small town controlled by Pizzateers. “Damn… I can't enter looking like this” said Zero as he looked on. He then gets out a cloak and walks into town. “who are you? asked a pizzateer. ”just a traveler. nothing more.“ lied Zero. The man believed him and Zero head to the bar. Inside was six pizzateers and the bartender. ”Bartender. A beer please.“ Said Zero. Three pizzateer looked at Zero then when back to there game of dice. ”Here you go" said the bartender. Zero took a sip. Then the door to the bar was slammed open. A pizzateer came in. Zero looked out of the corner of his eye and thought *Oh Shit!* The person who walked in was Imshard.

One of the pizzateers at the bar got up. He looked first at the dude in the cloak, and then at Shard. He then pulls out a special gun. The pizzateer was none other than me!

I pointed the gun at Shard. Just then, the fake emblem on my shoulder fell off. It revealed my broken Tacodier emblem. I was no longer of the Tacodiers. They had found out about me being at the peace meeting and stripped me of my rank. Luckily, they did not know why I was there.

I had decided it was better this way. That way, if the war ever did end, I waould not be hunted down so easily for being what I am. I decided to find the legendary Zero, and fight alongside him. I then hit my broken emblem. Black armor similar to Zero's covered my body. My gun grew, warpped around my arm, and became a part of it. I think it's about time I told you my name. I am Riku Valentine, and what I just described was my true form.

Riku:
Nice! Just nice!

5 points for joining up with Zero.

10 points for impersonating a pizzateer.

10 points for the detail of your story.

5 bonus points for true form.

Total points. 30.

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You must be thinking what the hell by now. well it's a new mission.

The mission is to continue the story as it goes along and to deal with Zero as you wish. (note: you can not kill Zero but other than that there is no boundaries.)

Imshard won the last one as well.

There he was!
Shard had finally tracked down Riku. Commander Cilantro was still in the infirmary after the incident in the west Sausage forest. Riku had gotten away by sacrificing his co-conspirators to the pursuers and escaped to Burger. Now he was back. Intelligence had detected him entering the hotly contested cheese desert region. He opened his holsters, held his blaster in one hand and tranq gun in the other. He burst in, raised the tranq and squeezed the trigger. The dart struck him between the eyes. He screamed and clutched his face for a moment, as the serum painfully filled his sinuses. He collapsed with a grunt. The mix would take 27 hours to wear off.
“don't move” - a simple command backed up with a muzzle pressed into the back of his neck. Shard froze obediantly. “toss your guns and get on the ground”. The off-duty pizzateers around the bar did nothing, despite the clear Colonel's star on Shard's uniform and the newly revealed taco emblem on Riku. crap, did Riku have an accomplice afterall? “drop them now”. he did so and kicked them away. “good now on your knees”
Instead he spun and knocked the pistol out of his attacker's hand and trapped it with one arm. His other hand swept a Pizza cutter out of its sheath towards his opponent's heart.
the man answered it expertly with his own blade, and swept Shard's legs out from beneath him. Shard shifted his weight on the way down and dragged his target with him. they rolled and ended each holding the other's arm in joint locks and knifes at the other's throat. Shard froze with recognition, his attacker did the same.
“Zero? Brother?”

Imshard:
Whoa! Nice. This took me two and a half reads to get. that the man was Zero.

10 points for complexity.

10 points for the battle.

10 points for coming up with the brother thing.

10 bouns points for having me read it twice to get it.

-5 points cause your men are doing nothing.

total 35 points.

Zero looked at Imshard. “What where you thinking joining any of these sides?” Yelled Zero as he got up. “well..I” stuttered Imshard who was still in shock of seeing Zero. “No matter… You must know I'm a wanted criminal if you are a Colonel.” Said Zero as he walked up to Riku. “Why don't you join use them!” Yelled Imshard. “You know Why! Yelled Zero in a tone that froze everyone in there tracks. ”The damned leaders killed my love and I have vowed to destory them both!“ Explaned Zero as he picked up Riku. ”If anyone of you follows me, I'll kill you." said Zero as he draged Riku out of the Bar and into the desert. Imshard and the Pizzateers watched them dissapper as the sun went down.

Shard stood stock still for a moment, shamed. Then he remembered himself.
He turned to the bleary eyed drunk troops in the bar. “Report to your commanders! You're all disgraces to your uniforms!” With that he charged out after his only remaining family. Encumbered by Riku, Zero hadn't gotten far. Shard yelled after him “ZERO!!! DOING THIS WONT BRING HER BACK!” He stopped dead and spun around glaring, his face contorted in rage. Shard had caught up now and spoke more softly. “Rosemary died a long time ago. It was tragic and you have shamed her memory by doing your acts in her name. she wouldn't have wanted this from anyone especially you!” he took a deep breath surprised by the rising emotion in his own voice, and continued. “I don't know what that filth told you he did but if you help him, you'll just being serving the bastards that killed her!”
Zero narrowed his eyes at this and glanced down at Riku. “Leave him here and I'll forget I saw you. Besides, he'll be dead in 26 hours if he doesn't get the antidote to the poison I shot him with. He needs to be airlifted to Prime for it to be administered.”

Zero just stared. He then droped Riku and said “Fine. but remember. It was both of the leaders who did it.” Said that, Zero continued on his way without riku. “Oh!” Said Zero “Rose never wanted to be called that. To me she was Ceil”. Imshard then picked up Riku and headed back.

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Imshard's points:

10 points for geting your men in line.

10 points for reasoning with Zero.

10 points for barging with him.

65 points total.

Shard didn't even bother notifying the local commanders.
He pulled out his satcom and the chopper was there in 20 minutes.
12 hours later Riku was given a counter dose and safely locked up inside a in cell in the most secure and heavily guarded fortress prison on the planet. PizzaTraz. He still wouldn't be awake for 15 hours.

Imshard:
Nice.

10 points for PizzaTraz.

10 points for continuing the story.

85 points total

(I'm going to let someone else post before I do again. They need to come up with there own way they meet up with Zero.

I'll lay off till somebody catches up to me.
So somebody post already, I'm getting itchy fingers.

“Ugh, where am I?” I thought as I looked around. I reconized the tranq that was used on me. I looked at my watch. I was awake 14 hours too early. That was good. And I was still in my true form! This place, if it was pizzatraz, it wasn't as guarded as everyone said it was. Must be because they weren't expecting me to wake up yet. Haha, their mistake. Poisons and tranqs never did have the desired effects on me.

I checked my equipment. The hidden compartment on my forearm hadn't been found. So I still had my beam saber. It was similar to Zero's, only mine was black, instead of green. All my squipment was black. I then checked my Shoulder compartment. My energy shield was still there as well. Haha, getting out of here was going to be easy.

I pulled out the shield and turned it on. I used it to cut my way out of the cell I was in. So easy. I then pulled out my sword with my other hand. They were sure to have heard the noise. It would have been easier to cut my way out of the window, but I decided I'd be nice, and exit through the front door. I watched as a few of the guards came running. Then I smiled evilly. Noone on the pizza side knew that my true form has supremely unmatchable speeds. Before the guards knew what happened, I was begind them, laughing maniacally as their heads fell off.

I started running at a normal, human pace down the nearest corridor. These idiots. Apparently, they had it set up so you could fing your way out, with maps all over the place. The first map I saw told me I was going in the right direction. I was surprised. There weren't very many guards to deal with. Sure, I had already killed 100 in the most gruesome way possible (how could you expect anything less? I've hated these guys my whole life!), but it just wasn't enough. There didn't seem enough guys to satisfy my true form's insatiable bloodlust.

Then I came to the exit. I was very happy, and it showed on my face in my supremely evil grin. There were about 200 guards guarding the entrance. Too bad Shard wasn't here. I wanted revenge, but I'm sure Zero would want it more once he found out the truth. I reaced up and pressed a button by my eye. My visor came down and closed over my entire face, except my eyes. The guards opened fire. I put up my sheild, and watched with growing dismay as about helf of the guards fell to their own bullets.

The other half were smart, they stopped firing. Too bad for them, it was their best way to get me. I charged in and killed them all. One of them was a true piece of work. He was the last one, and he begged me not to kill him. I couldn't fulfill his last request. I tore him apart, piece by gruesome peace. His guts were sprayed all over the wall. His body parts were flung up into the ceiling. Haha, I loved it a little too much. I was even singing “deck the halls with lots of guts, falalalala, lalalala” while I was doing it. It brought my kill count for the prison up to 310, and my total kill count up to 999 all together in my true form.

As soon as I left the prison, I set out to find Zero. Along the way, a pizzateer was unfortunate enough to become my 1000th kill. Eventually, I found Zero's hideout. “Hey, what the hell are you doing here?” he asked. “Simple, I've come to tell you the truth about that day” I answered. “I was there when Ceil was killed. I saw who did it. It was him. It was your brother. It was Shard!”

oooh good one I'll wait to see how zero reacts