The Quality Of Reclamation Page Thirty-Two
Genejoke on July 29, 2021
I'm wondering if anyone will spot the reference to a non trek sci fi novel on this page. Granted it's not a massively known book but it's by a fairly known author who wrote an episode of the animated series.
All the artwork for this story is complete and pages are put together aside from the lettering of the last three pages. I have a passable page buffer for a change.
The next story is mostly plotted and done so to a level I have never done before. Normally my plotting and scripting process is in my head and I wing it. When I do write a script I start with page one from a rough idea and write it, then iterate as I go and usually redo the dialogue when lettering. With the new story I have written the main and secondary plots as well as individual character plots for all the characters in the story. Okay not all, some others may have a single line or background appearance. but if they are in a few scenes they have a something going on.
El Cid at 7:30PM, Aug. 6, 2021
That second panel looks great! These natives... someone needs to invent paper bags, so they can cover their heads with them.
Genejoke at 4:46AM, Aug. 7, 2021
maybe some kirk masks, halloween style.
Peipei at 10:51AM, July 31, 2021
LOL I thought it seemed like these guys weren't the spaceship type. That and they all kind of look...related? xD
Genejoke at 4:46AM, Aug. 7, 2021
maybe they are.
plymayer at 5:31AM, July 29, 2021
Small gene pool. The modifications may have been something to compensate for that.
Genejoke at 4:39PM, July 29, 2021
Bingo.
dpat57 at 2:49AM, July 29, 2021
At least someone's still alive down here. Logically Lt.-Cmdr. Chevim would disintegrate boss man and become boss man himself. Damn those weakling Federation rules.
Genejoke at 4:39PM, July 29, 2021
Them damn pointy eared psychos.
jerrie at 2:19AM, July 29, 2021
the guy on the end looks like Mick Jagger a little bit
Genejoke at 4:39PM, July 29, 2021
Haha! He does. He's actually a tweaked version of Felix from Paradigm Shuffle though. And Ernst is a tweaked version of Winston,
byj561 at 1:59AM, July 29, 2021
Well Done!!!
Genejoke at 4:38PM, July 29, 2021
Thanks.
bravo1102 at 12:27AM, July 29, 2021
Well they certainly didn't enhance their language skills that's for sure.
Genejoke at 4:37PM, July 29, 2021
Nope, intelligence doesn't mean so much without a passable education.