"Out," by El Cid. pg 7

Genejoke on June 13, 2011

And so concludes this strange journey, to the wrong side of the tracks and back again. Though this story was in some ways brutishly straightforward, you're free to interpret and take away from it whatever you want. So I hope all of you got something worthwhile out of reading this. And if not, at least you got to see naked people. That's always a plus!

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ShirouZhiwu at 4:48PM, Oct. 29, 2012

The guy is redeemable, too bad there wasn't a better path available for him. "He needed killing" should be a valid defense.

Fastmax at 8:20AM, June 18, 2011

And if he didn't.. -what would have happened to the little boy? To his life ..to his generation? Not a sacrifice, but a necessity. Consider how our economics (mainly), laws, local and state government and modern social ethics are geared to work. They perpetuate the social problem -amongst the human element that chiefly is at root. Too bad there is not a page 8 for the character to realize this.

Jessy Dee at 3:06AM, June 17, 2011

wooww, a very well done secuence with out using words!!! congratulations!!!

Dark Pascual at 6:34AM, June 15, 2011

AWESOME!! Really great!

theorah at 2:25PM, June 14, 2011

I liked it very much, agreed it was straight forward but left a narrative open to interesting themes and interpretation :)Not sure how to intrpret it yet, I'd have to thunk about it haha